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Rip Van Winkle

After a long, long snooze, Rip Van Winkle Woke with a start, his duds all a-wrinkle Said he, a bit dotty "Quick! Bring me a potty I'm in need of a humongous tinkle!"

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thriveni c mysore
Date: 9/16/2024 6:39:00 AM
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congratulations dear poet.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/16/2024 9:38:00 AM
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Thank you, Thriveni. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey! BoB H
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/15/2024 9:08:00 AM
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haha. Maybe the funniest limerick I've seen on the list so far. Congrats for your win
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/15/2024 11:22:00 AM
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Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked. Best Always - Bpb H
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/15/2024 7:33:00 AM
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Bob, a hilarious limerick, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/15/2024 11:21:00 AM
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Thank you, Tania, for considering my entry in your contest worthy of a win! Bob H
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2024 8:20:00 AM
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What a cute Limerick write. Way tooooooo funny. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/5/2024 9:53:00 AM
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Thank you, Paula. I entered it in a soup contest - We'll see how it rates. I'm glad you liked it and many thanks for commenting - Bob H
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2024 8:17:00 PM
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Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Thanks for this 'Rip'-roarer, Bob!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/28/2024 9:54:00 AM
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Thanks, Gershon, for commenting on my nonsense! Glad it gave you some ha ha's. Best on you always - Bob H
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/24/2024 12:54:00 PM
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Cool language, neat figure to use, as well. Pangie
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/24/2024 5:39:00 PM
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Thank you, Pangie, as always, for your kind comment and support - Bob H
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2024 12:13:00 PM
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oh this is priceless humour Bob, thanks for the giggles:-) hugs jan xx
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/24/2024 12:32:00 PM
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Thank you, Jan. Great to hear from you. Stand by, I have another limerick re politicians I think you will like. Bob
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Karen Jones
Date: 8/24/2024 11:58:00 AM
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lol fun
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/24/2024 12:32:00 PM
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Thanks, Karen - glad it gave you a laugh. Bob

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