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Robert L. Hinshaw

Rip Van Winkle

After a long, long snooze, Rip Van Winkle

Woke with a start, his duds all a-wrinkle

Said he, a bit dotty

"Quick!   Bring me a potty

I'm in need of a humongous tinkle!"

Copyright © Robert L. Hinshaw | Year Posted 2024

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thriveni c mysore

September 16, 2024 at 6:39 AM

congratulations dear poet.

Robert L. Hinshaw

September 16, 2024 at 9:38 AM

Thank you, Thriveni. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey! BoB H

Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2024 at 9:08 AM

haha. Maybe the funniest limerick I've seen on the list so far. Congrats for your win

Robert L. Hinshaw

September 15, 2024 at 11:22 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked. Best Always - Bpb H

September 15, 2024 at 7:33 AM

Bob, a hilarious limerick, congratulations on your winning placement.

Robert L. Hinshaw

September 15, 2024 at 11:21 AM

Thank you, Tania, for considering my entry in your contest worthy of a win! Bob H

Paula Goldsmith

September 5, 2024 at 8:20 AM

What a cute Limerick write. Way tooooooo funny. Have a blessed day writing away................

Robert L. Hinshaw

September 5, 2024 at 9:53 AM

Thank you, Paula. I entered it in a soup contest - We'll see how it rates. I'm glad you liked it and many thanks for commenting - Bob H

August 25, 2024 at 8:17 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Thanks for this 'Rip'-roarer, Bob!

Robert L. Hinshaw

August 28, 2024 at 9:54 AM

Thanks, Gershon, for commenting on my nonsense! Glad it gave you some ha ha's. Best on you always - Bob H

Panagiota Romios

August 24, 2024 at 12:54 PM

Cool language, neat figure to use, as well. Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

August 24, 2024 at 5:39 PM

Thank you, Pangie, as always, for your kind comment and support - Bob H

August 24, 2024 at 12:13 PM

oh this is priceless humour Bob, thanks for the giggles:-) hugs jan xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

August 24, 2024 at 12:32 PM

Thank you, Jan. Great to hear from you. Stand by, I have another limerick re politicians I think you will like. Bob

August 24, 2024 at 11:58 AM

lol fun

Robert L. Hinshaw

August 24, 2024 at 12:32 PM

Thanks, Karen - glad it gave you a laugh. Bob

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