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R.I.P. Me Apart

R.I.P. Me Apart Rip me apart from the inside out, give me a new hole to bleed from, bring me to life when your done because your love for pain is an overdose for me and another slit wrist for the masses who want to be you, I met you in a hustlers hideout the house for lost souls and the people there are half past dead with the scars on their wrists that make blood fill the land and hearts drop to the floor like bullets through a glass house, so take the leap for one last dance and say good-bye to your next ex-boyfriend -By John Comstock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/18/2010 12:01:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/16/2010 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:02:00 AM
The theme is consistent with the content. The flow of the words also sends a message. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:31:00 PM
Hi John... u need to put a title in your new write or the poets cannot access it to read.. appreciate your wonderful comments on my poetry and welcome on board the Soup Train.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" looking forward to reading more of your creative writes...
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