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R andom radicals rush rip-roariously on ward O nerously oggling on-lookers abroad A nnealing axle-grease atop ankle-high boots D eliberately dashing dilettante seekers T raveling tenaciously toward tree-lined detours R oad rage roars, racers recline, rear-wheels wheelie I mprobable instances intoxicate incalculable intensity Probably, they'd get there alive!? S irens sound E mptiness emanates extravehicular extemes N ickle-plated, nonentities now D eath, death, dangles I nsanities inane inference N ickle-plated, nonentities now G one. Contest:GROOVE IT ! Free Poetry Contest Details Style: Heavy Metal Date:10/9/13 revised Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 5/24/2014 6:27:00 AM
You wrote a winner, well done. I'm checking out poetry styles for a piece I'm considering, had even been thinking of alliterations, but you've got me re-thinking. Did you mean "their??" 2nd to last line 1st stanza. Still in awe, Scott
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/24/2014 8:47:00 AM
THanks Scott YES, there! THANKS
Date: 11/3/2013 1:04:00 PM
Extreme talent mixed with clever wit. I admire poets who take off on tangents that stretch the limits. Well done and congrats !
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:26:00 PM
DG , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~
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Date: 10/28/2013 6:41:00 PM
I'm groovin' it right with you cher!...YOU a heavy metal fan? The painter/coffee shop/yoga/therapist from New England?? Wonders never cease...You got some SERIOUS alliteration going on here and how the heck did you combine it with whatever that other form is called? Congrats - Tim
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:58:00 AM
interesting Debbie, 2 -in -1... love it... ... congratulations on your win...LINDA
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 AM
Annealing axle-grease atop ankle-high are the queen of wonderful metaphors!!! I love it !!
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:05:00 PM
creative write, you grooved it right into a win, congrats :) hugs
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Date: 10/9/2013 12:16:00 PM
jeepers, this is rock- and roll, debbie.. put on your suede shoes and do the hip-twisting sway... yeah, cool!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/4/2013 11:42:00 AM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit A great duo POEM Acrostic Alliteration Superb Quill. I am slowly coming back to writing again I Thank-YOU for YOUR Prayers and well Wishes and YOUR Gracious Comments I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:15:00 PM
I appreciate the skill that it took to pen this one but it didn't do it for me. I much prefer other pieces you have written.
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Date: 8/29/2013 6:41:00 PM
Not so sure about their arrival..Enjoyed reading the creative contest entry though..Thanks for the visits to my work..He knows your name for sure..Do you know His?..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 5:12:00 PM
haha, cool last line. I really like this one, Debs.
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