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Rip -Roaring

R andom radicals rush rip-roariously on ward O nerously oggling on-lookers abroad A nnealing axle-grease atop ankle-high boots D eliberately dashing dilettante seekers T raveling tenaciously toward tree-lined detours R oad rage roars, racers recline, rear-wheels wheelie I mprobable instances intoxicate incalculable intensity Probably, they'd get there alive!? S irens sound E mptiness emanates extravehicular extemes N ickle-plated, nonentities now D eath, death, dangles I nsanities inane inference N ickle-plated, nonentities now G one. Contest:GROOVE IT ! Free Poetry Contest Details Style: Heavy Metal Date:10/9/13 revised Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/24/2014 6:27:00 AM

You wrote a winner, well done. I'm checking out poetry styles for a piece I'm considering, had even been thinking of alliterations, but you've got me re-thinking. Did you mean "their??" 2nd to last line 1st stanza. Still in awe, Scott

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/24/2014 8:47:00 AM

THanks Scott YES, there! THANKS

Karen Anglesey

Date: 11/3/2013 1:04:00 PM

Extreme talent mixed with clever wit. I admire poets who take off on tangents that stretch the limits. Well done and congrats !

Skat A

Date: 10/30/2013 12:26:00 PM

DG , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/28/2013 6:41:00 PM

I'm groovin' it right with you cher!...YOU a heavy metal fan? The painter/coffee shop/yoga/therapist from New England?? Wonders never cease...You got some SERIOUS alliteration going on here and how the heck did you combine it with whatever that other form is called? Congrats - Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/28/2013 11:58:00 AM

interesting Debbie, 2 -in -1... love it... ... congratulations on your win...LINDA

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 AM

Annealing axle-grease atop ankle-high boots.........you are the queen of wonderful metaphors!!! I love it !!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/27/2013 8:05:00 PM

creative write, you grooved it right into a win, congrats :) hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/9/2013 12:16:00 PM

jeepers, this is rock- and roll, debbie.. put on your suede shoes and do the hip-twisting sway... yeah, cool!..:) huggs

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 9/4/2013 11:42:00 AM

Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit A great duo POEM Acrostic Alliteration Superb Quill. I am slowly coming back to writing again I Thank-YOU for YOUR Prayers and well Wishes and YOUR Gracious Comments I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/29/2013 7:15:00 PM

I appreciate the skill that it took to pen this one but it didn't do it for me. I much prefer other pieces you have written.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 6:41:00 PM

Not so sure about their arrival..Enjoyed reading the creative contest entry though..Thanks for the visits to my work..He knows your name for sure..Do you know His?..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2013 5:12:00 PM

haha, cool last line. I really like this one, Debs.