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Having a new shower installed...and a few laughs.

RINSE AND REPEAT the wall of my shower stumbles up stairs as he sings: “shower time” his feet caught him unaware and the Laurel to his Hardy follows, with a folded ladder I duck twice...to the left, to the right “thanks for showering me with laughs,” I jest, as I warn, that a poet captures the mind’s snapshot and adds it to her faux pas poetry collection. 5/31/2018

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Date: 5/31/2018 1:56:00 PM
So charming, so true. :) Thanks for this poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2018 2:12:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed!

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