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Ringing Roses and Illusion In Dusk Walk

Slipping waves Fast breezes Coldness and stone Illusion of images In the dusk walk Forest shadows Beautifully leaf's Lovely birds Eyes winks Singing birds Something in mind Going on n on That's why illusion enhancing ...still unconcluded....

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/9/2024 7:58:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/17/2017 4:49:00 PM

And your walk may never conclude! Lovely in its simplicity.

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/17/2017 4:30:00 PM

Nice Ravindra...and the illusion could be this lifetime and beyond...interesting what you touched upon...All the best to you