Ringing Roses and Illusion In Dusk Walk

Slipping waves
Fast breezes

Coldness and stone
Illusion of images

In the dusk walk
Forest shadows

Beautifully leaf's
Lovely birds

Eyes winks
Singing birds

Something in mind
Going on n on

That's why illusion enhancing
...still unconcluded....
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Agustin Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 7:58 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Wanter Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 4:49 PM
And your walk may never conclude! Lovely in its simplicity.
Michael Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Nice Ravindra...and the illusion could be this lifetime and beyond...interesting what you touched upon...All the best to you
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