Ring of Truth

It’s not with finger, you’ll wear this ring
It’s to be worn with heart and soul
For there was a man who wore it proud
From whom, death took its toll

He knew one day, the ring would find
Its way to the destined one
So wear it proudly for him now
You are that man’s only son

You may not know, he loved you so
But life has a way to turn
It’s with grief, you take possession
But with hope that you will learn

The man, from where the ring had come
Was strong, proud and true
A sickness came, stole him away
But he left this ring for you

You may harbor anger, that’s your right
That may never go away
Remember, there was a man who loved you so
With this ring, carry him, today





When my brother died, he was wearing a claddagh ring I had given to him when he was sent 
to the Persian Gulf during wartime there. It was my ring and I told him to bring it back to 
me. His son was 1 year old when he died and I hadn't been able to locate him until last year 
and now he's 17 and he told me that his mom (the devil) told him that I took his fathers ring 
when he died. I sent it to him along with this poem because I didn't have the heart to tell him 
the truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fawcett Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 10:35 AM
A beautifully written poem with a sad story behind it, Michael. The Claddagh is such a powerful symbol of love, friendship and loyalty. I am hoping that the love, friendship and loyalty that you shared with your brother continues to grow with your nephew. Nigel
Jordan Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 9:35 AM
Michael - very powerful and moving poem - I never knew my father and just in the last year or so have i got to know my sisters and brother on his side - i have got a couple of his things now that I do treasure very deeply - hopefully your brothers son will treasure the ring as I do my fathers things that I now have - Beautiful poetry - God Bless, MJ
Torres Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 8:12 AM
michael This is very special boy what a story behind this beautiful thoughtful write. I am just captivated by this story. It is a story and and a very touching one at that. Love this Michael I will try to read your poems and comment on the rest of them I m trying to get my joy back up. What a story and what a poem. A very special one for sure. Michael Torres
Gorelick Avatar
November 20, 2008 at 5:50 AM
My poem today is something along these lines. Hope you have a relationship with this young man now...I have a feeling he could use you in his life. Lovely write. BG
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