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Riding the C-Train

on a long walk he died riding on the c-train with my friend going to smoke some bowls from behind a man said to me your dads not dead i didn't turn around but now i think he died... 18 years ago

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Date: 8/10/2009 4:37:00 AM
aww a sad write, my dad died 13 years ago on august the 28th it is hard when they are called home, thanks for your comments on my poems, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/3/2009 5:00:00 AM
Very interesting writing. I hope it's not true but only a poem. Keep writing. Sara
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