Line Gauthier Poet Sonnet

Riding Out the Thunder Storm

The poor little thing, he was just a’shivering
Scared right out of his wits I’d see him jolting
Bewildered, seeking strong arms to hold him tight
To make him feel a little safe and calm his fright

Though at times I’d feel earth’s sudden trembling
To me t’was but torrential rains with bolts of lightning
Everyone knows I’m deaf since birth just like my aunt
But my dear little dog didn’t buy my being nonchalant

He shivered violently with those pitiful large eyes
As viciously outside the storm continued to terrorize
I took my pooch into my loving arms, got warm
Curled up and together waited out the storm 

Tried to appease his pounding heart
Confident was he we’d never be apart



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on February 14, 2018 for contest DESCRIBE A THUNDER STORM WITHOUT THE SENSE OF SOUND sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI  -  RANKED 3RD

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Timothy Mcguire June 28, 2018 at 11:30 PM God blessed the dog with you and blessed you with the dog... Beautiful

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2018 at 11:26 AM Oh lucky you!! I see you got a win in this contest. Wish I had (I am jealous of those that won!!) Your approach was very interesting, having the main character not be able to even hear the storm. WELL DONE . It's at the top of the second page for your best poems!! Line Gauthier April 15, 2018 at 11:45 AM Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Andrea.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 5, 2018 at 8:19 AM Lovely penning Line! Congratulations on your well deserved win :) xomo! Line Gauthier March 5, 2018 at 9:24 AM Thank you so much, Maureen. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong March 5, 2018 at 4:08 AM An excellent win for a heartwarming poem Line. Congratulations on your deserving third placement! : ) Line Gauthier March 5, 2018 at 9:23 AM Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2018 at 11:59 PM Well deserved win Line. Congratulations. Tom Line Gauthier March 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper March 3, 2018 at 10:12 PM Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery made me feel every line... Line Gauthier March 3, 2018 at 10:19 PM Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Carrie Richards March 3, 2018 at 7:37 PM Ahh....this is such a clever way to incorporate the theme.... Our dogs get terrified during thunderstorms..so it was easy to relate! Well done Line !! Line Gauthier March 3, 2018 at 8:38 PM Thank you for your warm visit and comment, Carrie.

Sandra Haight March 3, 2018 at 6:58 PM Line, I enjoyed where you took the theme to describe a 'soundless' thunderstorm! Lovely imagery of comforting a beloved pet who heard it all! Congrats on your well-deserved podium win! Hugs, Sandra Line Gauthier March 3, 2018 at 7:12 PM Thank you so much, Sandra. It was based on an actual event.

Rhoda Tripp March 3, 2018 at 6:39 PM Congratulations on your win, Line. Well deserved. Line Gauthier March 3, 2018 at 7:11 PM Thank you, Rhoda. Much appreciated.

David Welch February 19, 2018 at 10:28 PM Had a dog just like that, reminded me of him. They bark so loud but run from thunder...Nicely done. Line Gauthier March 3, 2018 at 6:39 PM Little chickens on four legs, right David? Thanks for your visit and comment.

Tahira Parveen February 15, 2018 at 12:02 PM Hi Line, Just shows what a lovely and kind caring person you are.:) Line Gauthier February 15, 2018 at 12:10 PM You are so sweet to say that, Tahira. The old saying is so true... it takes one to know one. Line xx

Emile Pinet February 15, 2018 at 10:44 AM You have a quick wit and an enviable imagination. Your poem was heartfelt, believable and just human enough to be easily relatable. Wonderful work, with great thought given to the subject mater as the story gently unfolded for the readers delight. It flows well and holds your interest from start to finish. It says a lot without much thought , but a lot of heart! It rings true and is a joy to read my friend, Emile. Line Gauthier February 15, 2018 at 12:14 PM Thank you so much, Emile. Unfortunately I have less merit than you might think. My poem is based on a true story that happened to me with a neighbour's dog that had snubbed me for a year. We were best buds after that memorable occasion. And, of course, I am not deaf... although I have been accused of having selective hearing. Thank you so much for your kind message and encouragement. Line xx

CayCay Godwin February 15, 2018 at 10:18 AM I love your approach which unfolded beautifully. A joy to read, completely complete this poem is and utterly believable. I believe you did an excellent job with the theme. All the best ... CayCay Line Gauthier February 15, 2018 at 12:14 PM Thank you so much, CayCay. Love your visits and messages. Line xx