Ride In the Blue Ridge

It seems as if some bold designing hand
With black and silver ribbon tied the hills--
Tied by squeezing in the pliant land,
And left a concrete bow beside the mills.

I skimmed old roads both straight and serpentine.
Before me rose the ground in squadrons lined--
In mighty columns of advancing green
They split, fled past and joined themselves behind.

The distant pines in sudden patches sprang
To sing a martial hymn for me below.
Endurance in the elements they sang
A solemn song I was too fast to know.

And fertile seeds of hamlets dotted fields
With white and red--and lent a bustling din
Of bells  and hammers where a valley yields
To yellow corn, to foreign soot, to men.

I stopped to see the misty mountains rise
In blue and gray above the ribbon strand.
Their solid stillness melting into skies
Aroused a sadness I could understand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/23/2015 8:12:00 AM
Oh boy... you pulled me further in with each line, Jerrell. The Blue Ridge Mountains look exactly the way you describe them. I love the image of them tied with the concrete road as a bow. It's such a beautiful area that it almost seems a shame for people to intrude within it. fav for me. 7
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Date: 12/23/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Lin Lane. I'm happy when a poem is enjoyed. My ancestors came from the blue ridge area.
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