Riches Beyond Rich

I wish to be a rich one
Respected for all I have
People making way for me
The head of the class


I wish to be a rich one
Given a wealth of knowledge
Helping those who are in need
With a humble heart



Dodoitsu doppelgänger contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 3:56 PM
richard. I hope you realized I had put my sport one liner in the wrong poem box. hahaha. that is why you were confused on oblivion when I used the jet ski picture!!
Nance Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Another winner...way to go, you are a Rich one Richard :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Riches will be more meaningful if used not only with thyself but also to others.. =`) congratz!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Olive.
Tor Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 1:40 AM
Richard a well deserved win. My favorite for the contest. Congratulations my friend!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Michael, much appreciated!
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:07 PM
I see congrats on this one. So I hope it scored super high!! Congratulations.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Thanks Andrea, it scored second.
Callus Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Hi Richard, congratulations on your win. Cleverly tackled dodoitsu, from both sides of a social perspective. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Paul.:0)
A. Sharma Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:04 AM
Very wise words n nicely done poem Richard! Congrats on great win!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Upma.
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 5:03 PM
I like the contrast in this winner..Way to go ..Great topic..Congrats..Thanks for stopping by with congrats./.Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:58 AM
My pleasure Sarah.
Breidenthal Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Very nicely done, Richard. Looks like a congrats is in order! ^-^ Always, Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Thanks Laura.
Godwin Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Impressive, Richard - Congrats on your win ... CayCay
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Hi and thanks Cay Cay.
A  Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Richard, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Good morning and thanks SKAT.
Roper Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Great write, Richard, congratulations on your y!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Nice write, truly captured the essence of the contest I think. Congrats on the win.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Thanks John.
Haight Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Wonderful, Richard, and much wisdom conveyed. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:11 AM
So much wisdom.... (what is truly important) !! Congratulations Richard, on a well thought-out poem!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Thanks Carrie. ;0)
Negron Flores Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Nadya.
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 7:34 PM
what a GREAT take on this theme. Very well done, richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Andrea, I enjoyed yours as well.
Manassian Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:02 PM
I want all your wishes to come true for you, dear.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Eileen, I have been greatly blessed.
Gentry Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Very nice. I like the subtle change and not so subtle ending. Good one!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Thanks Susan.
Smith Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 10:18 AM
A wealth of knowledge would be great to have and be able to use it to help the less fortunate.
Smith Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Not too much celebrating. My youngest was sick.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:07 AM
Thanks Tim, how was the birthday celebration?
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