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Richard, My Brother

Richard, my brother, was never the "other" Parents deemed us a perfect fit We never fought, though custom said we ought I was truly blessed because of it But as we got older, love's warmth grew colder We became as strangers, he and I Silence, now the measure of our lost treasure Does he, as I do, wonder why? For Nathan Lecesse's contest "Sibling Rivalry"

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Date: 7/30/2009 11:46:00 AM
Life's river, my guess, carries two different directions. Kiss and make up, he still your brother. As for this Sara thing, she's is beautiful, but honestly, lol, I was looking a little deeper, for the truth within her soul, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:32:00 PM
Besy wishes with this one Corinne.Thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/2/2009 12:05:00 AM
Best wishes with this wistful write Coriine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome blog comments today
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:51:00 PM
Great poem Corrine, all the very best in Nathans contest>>James
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