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Rich Hide and Seek

Rich man covered eyes counting to 1,003 rich friend jumped in lear jet to flee flew to Brazil is there still waiting to be found hiding behind tree. 9-19-17

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/12/2017 9:50:00 PM

Wow! This is the most creative limerick I've read yet on the Soup, Che. Great poem. And of course, you gave us our obligatory laugh fix. That humor syringe really hit the funny bone good. A very special poem ... going into the fave file, pronto. Love and many blessings of peace always.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/13/2017 9:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for Very kind comment and visit Freddie; glad you liked it enough to be a fave! Love, peace and blessings to you too!~Che :)

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/7/2017 7:42:00 PM

Rich is the man who can find or count on friends. Whom pay his bail without interest. Love the sentiment in this . A true 7,000 and see come out come out wherever you are

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 10/7/2017 9:20:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Christopher; appreciate it!~Che :)

Pat Adams

Date: 9/21/2017 9:34:00 PM

I can't even imagine how your mind works. The stuff you come up with is amazing. It's funny but demands to be relevant at the same time. Well done......Pat

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/22/2017 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; I'm no poetic Einstein but keep trying!~Che :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 9/19/2017 8:19:00 AM

I think you've found your niche worth these!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/19/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; appreciate your stop by's!~Che :)