Rich Hide and Seek

Rich man covered eyes counting to 1,003
rich friend jumped in lear jet to flee
flew to Brazil
is there still
waiting to be found hiding behind tree.


9-19-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Wow! This is the most creative limerick I've read yet on the Soup, Che. Great poem. And of course, you gave us our obligatory laugh fix. That humor syringe really hit the funny bone good. A very special poem ... going into the fave file, pronto. Love and many blessings of peace always.
Hoffman Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Thanks so much for Very kind comment and visit Freddie; glad you liked it enough to be a fave! Love, peace and blessings to you too!~Che :)
Flaherty Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Rich is the man who can find or count on friends. Whom pay his bail without interest. Love the sentiment in this . A true 7,000 and see come out come out wherever you are
Hoffman Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:20 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Christopher; appreciate it!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:34 PM
I can't even imagine how your mind works. The stuff you come up with is amazing. It's funny but demands to be relevant at the same time. Well done......Pat
Hoffman Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; I'm no poetic Einstein but keep trying!~Che :)
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September 19, 2017 at 8:19 AM
I think you've found your niche worth these!
Hoffman Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; appreciate your stop by's!~Che :)
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