Rich Harvest, Long Winter - Alouette

RICH HARVEST,  LONG WINTER  - ALOUETTE



Summer’s green near shut  -
Held ajar by glut. 
Overgenerous rewards
On the groaning ground  -
Spilling o’er with round,
Bursting butter-beans in gourds.

Now is winter’s brown  -
The piled logs run down.
Drifting dead, the months prolong,
Freeze all thought of yields :
Cold minds whiten fields.
Till springs door open   -  too long.



2nd  September   2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Congrats on your super win, Sidney. Beautiful! Lainie
Nance Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Congrats, a great poem and a great win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your big win for this lovely Alouette Sidney.
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:08 PM
a beautiful alouette Sidney many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Sydney, your poem is magnificent in imagery, meaning and meter. I was not fon of the very last line, but oh my gosh, I just loved everything about your poem! Congrats on my winners' list.
Beck Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:53 AM
I, too, was uneasy about last line...obviously implied double meaning....primary meaning is "it's too long till the door springs open"......it was just a bit TOO awkward and contrived...I agree....best wishes, Syd
Beck Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Andy, You are very kind to give me such a good placing.Contest was a great challenge which I enjoyed....never written any alouette before.
Gorelick Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Congrats on a very nice win..I especially like the first stanza. BG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations Sid xx
A. Sharma Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Lovely Alouetee Sidney! Very brilliant take! Congrats on top place win!
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