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Rhythm of the Falls # 2 .

HEAR  THAT  GENTLE  TUNE .

  IN  THE  PERFECT  RHYTHMIC  FLOW .

  RHAPSODY  IN  BLUE .



 Inspired by Raul's Rhythm of the falls contest ..

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Elaine George

January 2, 2010 at 11:11 AM

I still think this one is superb! Sean. Love, Lainie. Thank you for your kind comments today.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

December 21, 2009 at 9:15 PM

Beautiful Haiku to describe the rhythm of the falls with this particular piece of splendid music by Gershwin. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comment on my poem. Wished you had finished your sentence. I am not sure what you wanted to say. "I wish I were ..." You wish you were what? Have a merry Christmas, Caroline.

Farah Chamma

November 16, 2009 at 5:34 AM

A great write Sean...as always.. Take good care.. Farah

Sue Mason

October 28, 2009 at 9:29 AM

Awesome write here, Sean ... good luck in the contest and have a fun Halloween weekend !!

Laurie Ginn

October 18, 2009 at 9:37 PM

Brings to mind the sultry sound of a baritone sax, nice to see ya sugarbutt

Robin L. Gass

October 11, 2009 at 1:48 PM

Lovely is your song, dear Sean! Good luck in Rauls' contest! Love, QR

Carolyn Devonshire

October 11, 2009 at 1:28 PM

This is a very soothing interpretation of the photograph, Sean. I love the thought of a "Rhapsody in Blue." Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

October 9, 2009 at 2:13 PM

This is gorgeous, Sean! With just a few choice words, you've created a desirable retreat...one that I could use right about now! Great to see you posting! Hugs, Donna

October 9, 2009 at 1:55 PM

What a creative view in this one! I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen

Elaine George

October 9, 2009 at 6:39 AM

AWESOME! Sean. Love, lainie

Brian Strand

October 8, 2009 at 7:16 AM

Best wishes with this one Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.No wellies needed when we went it was a rhapsody in blue that day.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 8, 2009 at 4:55 AM

Ooh! Sean, this is a winner... I heard the beauty through your words. ("O" Thanks!) Lovingly, Dane

Raul Moreno

October 7, 2009 at 4:10 PM

Sean, thanks for the support of my contest...Raul

James Fraser

October 7, 2009 at 1:52 PM

Excellent Haiku Sean >> best of luck in Raul's contest >> James

Carrie Richards

October 7, 2009 at 12:52 PM

Gershwin set to thel music of nature!!! Love it! ~ Good luck in Raul's contest, Sean!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 7, 2009 at 12:36 PM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Sean. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best in the contest. I think you have a winner. Love, Carol