Rhythm of a River

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August- 5- 2025

Rolling with the R's Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

river flows in slow strides, kissing the rocky shores, to unknown lands, in great wonder. fetters that bind are broken asunder. its heart is deluged with a song waves lap merry along. songs fill the air. river

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2025 1:15:00 PM

Lovely, Valsa! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2025 7:19:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 8/5/2025 4:56:00 PM

Lonely entry for the contest, Valsa. Good luck! my friend. Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/5/2025 4:13:00 PM

loved the quiet rhythm of your poem. It was a 'delicious' read & a great contest contender. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 8/5/2025 10:41:00 AM

Rhythmic poem on rhythm of a river. Beautiful picture.

Jay Narain

Date: 8/5/2025 10:40:00 AM

Rhythmic poem on rhythm f a river.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2025 5:09:00 AM

Yes, it does have its own rhythm and song. I love to go to the river and enjoy the sights and sounds of the water. The one here probably is stained and out of its banks after all the rain that has been coming. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Maria Williams

Date: 8/5/2025 5:08:00 AM

Dear Valsa, Such a soothing flow of words—like the river itself, full of quiet freedom and song. Good luck in the contest...Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2025 2:14:00 AM

- Sounds like a nice place to sit and listen to the river... lovely written, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs