Get Your Premium Membership

Rhythm of a Distant Song

The storms were strong with the wind fierce and the waves high Always trying to stay afloat, to not drown and try to learn to fly Survival became a way of life, to make it through opposing current While I spoke the truth, they lashed at me, twisting what I meant It was cold, so cold, many times in the middle of the dark night When everything good, seemed to be completely out of sight Then one day when the sun did rise, he suddenly came along I could hear the rhythm of a soothing, comforting, distant song The waters calmed like a mirror of glass, I could see reflections It had been so long and I didn’t have the usual objections It was different as the scenery slowly evolved and changed As I adapted to new things and my thoughts were rearranged Although without wings, I was flying, but no longer alone Across the sphere of clear skies, where the wind had blown Heidi Sands 9/28/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2017 10:46:00 AM
Beautifully penned Heidi..best wishes
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph :)
Date: 9/28/2017 11:41:00 AM
This is from the heart--words capture the feelings so well--amazing lines throughout, but the stanza before the last is just lovely!
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Vijay ! I appreciate your specific feedback too :)
Date: 9/28/2017 10:32:00 AM
Amazing Heidi...love this..a fav
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Tim. I am happy you consider it a favorite :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things