Rhythm

rhythm writhing along ~ arms coiling, finger snaps, free wheeling waist undulating. strobe light creates a scene otherworldly, bathed in the shadow of romance. our eyes and hips touching, and lips humming... rhythm 8/28/2018 Oh, what the hell just toss one in Contest (John Lawless) 10th place

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John Lawless

Date: 9/1/2018 2:35:00 PM

...."I've got rhythm.....I've got music....I've got my girl.....who could ask for anything more?"......HUBBA-HUBBA Thanks for steaming up the contest Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 6:26:00 PM

LOL! Thanks! Your comment...fun!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/31/2018 3:43:00 PM

Whew, I need a cold shower after this! Very sensual-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 8:38:00 AM

LOL! Thanks :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/31/2018 3:20:00 AM

ew la la type of good, me likes! All the best in the contest and all else, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 8:38:00 AM

Thank you, dear CayCay!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/30/2018 2:52:00 PM

Hello Kim, yes that would be rhythm. Have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/30/2018 12:29:00 PM

That was amazing! You've made the point with rhythm and bright color; well done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you!

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/29/2018 9:11:00 AM

All in good rhythm with your verse...nicely done Kim...love & light...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 4:04:00 PM

Thank you, WW!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/29/2018 6:57:00 AM

Such a lovely poem,Kim. Never tried Rictameter.Learned something new today.Thanks for sharing this,Kim.loved this.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Supraja!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/28/2018 1:36:00 PM

You are painting with your words a choreography of beauty that enchants your reader to dance following the flow of your RHYTHM! A pleasure to read your wonderful Rictameter Kim.. Shine and be blessed always.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 7:24:00 AM

Blessings to you, sweet Besma!

Chris Green

Date: 8/28/2018 11:44:00 AM

Your poem definitely has a beautiful rhythm all its own. Loved this Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 7:25:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2018 9:31:00 AM

A rhythmic dance of words and romance--well crafted poem, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!