Kim Rodrigues Poet Rictameter

Rhythm

rhythm 
writhing along ~
arms coiling, finger snaps,
free wheeling waist undulating.
strobe light creates a scene otherworldly,
bathed in the shadow of romance.
our eyes and hips touching,
and lips humming...
rhythm

8/28/2018

Oh, what the hell just toss one in Contest (John Lawless)
10th place

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John Lawless September 1, 2018 at 2:35 PM ...."I've got rhythm.....I've got music....I've got my girl.....who could ask for anything more?"......HUBBA-HUBBA Thanks for steaming up the contest Kim Kim Rodrigues September 1, 2018 at 6:26 PM LOL! Thanks! Your comment...fun!

Michelle Faulkner August 31, 2018 at 3:43 PM Whew, I need a cold shower after this! Very sensual- Kim Rodrigues September 1, 2018 at 8:38 AM LOL! Thanks :)

CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 3:20 AM ew la la type of good, me likes! All the best in the contest and all else, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Kim Rodrigues September 1, 2018 at 8:38 AM Thank you, dear CayCay!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2018 at 2:52 PM Hello Kim, yes that would be rhythm. Have a nice day my friend. Kim Rodrigues August 31, 2018 at 8:01 AM Thank you!

M. L. Kiser August 30, 2018 at 12:29 PM That was amazing! You've made the point with rhythm and bright color; well done! Kim Rodrigues August 31, 2018 at 8:01 AM Thank you!

Winged Warrior August 29, 2018 at 9:11 AM All in good rhythm with your verse...nicely done Kim...love & light...^WW^ Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2018 at 4:04 PM Thank you, WW!

Supraja Kannan August 29, 2018 at 6:57 AM Such a lovely poem,Kim. Never tried Rictameter.Learned something new today.Thanks for sharing this,Kim.loved this. Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2018 at 7:23 AM Thank you, sweet Supraja!

Besma Riabi Dziri August 28, 2018 at 1:36 PM You are painting with your words a choreography of beauty that enchants your reader to dance following the flow of your RHYTHM! A pleasure to read your wonderful Rictameter Kim.. Shine and be blessed always. Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2018 at 7:24 AM Blessings to you, sweet Besma!

Chris Green August 28, 2018 at 11:44 AM Your poem definitely has a beautiful rhythm all its own. Loved this Kim Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2018 at 7:25 AM Thank you, dear friend!

Vijay Pandit August 28, 2018 at 9:31 AM A rhythmic dance of words and romance--well crafted poem, Kim. Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2018 at 7:26 AM Thank you, Vijay!