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Rhythem of Life

rhythem of life--- the mind, body, and soul dance to the beat

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/11/2011 1:01:00 PM

Good !Oxox Anne-Lise

Rosalyn Lampkin
Date: 12/12/2011 10:54:00 AM

Hello Annie, thank you for reading and commenting. Have a great holiday season

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2011 2:32:00 PM

this is more free verse Rosalyn..think of a haiku is a snap shot with sound and scent & tactil sensations too..snap the picture of say a cow in a field..now we must be FACTUAL no imagining the cows/ runs across the rye field/ the farmers calls..see how simple? now you try..I will check in again soon. Light & Love

Rosalyn Lampkin
Date: 11/21/2011 10:47:00 PM

Debbie this was not meant tobe a haiku form that is the reason I posted as "I don't know" form. However, thank you for commenting. Rosalyn

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/19/2011 8:18:00 AM

great pen

Rosalyn Lampkin
Date: 11/19/2011 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Lisa. Have a wonderful day. Rosalyn