Rhyming's Blase

I've gathered you all here today, to lament rhyming poetry's death. Fledgling poets feel it's blasé, regardless of its rhythm and breath. Lyrical poetry's a cliché, though it's been recited for years. For now, there's a different way of expressing your fears and tears. Exiled to the pages of time, Rhyme died when its critics shunned it. And its once clear, distinctive chime; was stripped of its rapier wit. Beloved, and yet inked by few, it has slipped into history. But, when I hear what rhyme can do, its death becomes a mystery. Rhyme was laid to rest by freestyle, let's lift our pens; bid it adieu! And visit it once in a while, perhaps, to write a line or two.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 3:38 PM
A fun read, Emile. Hard to believe there would be a day where rhyming would not be appreciated.
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Thanks Line, as always your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Sirak Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Wow! This is so lyrical and flowing. I love to read rhyming poetry but when I rhyme it seems to be accidental.
Pinet Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Thanks Monterey, as always your comments are most welcome. Emile.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:31 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, your rhyming is a pleasure to read - a good flow in your writing, Emile !!! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Thanks so Anne-lise, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 6:28 PM
You have amazing flow Emile.....SKAT
Pinet Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much SKAT, I appreciate your continued support and admire your dedication to the soup, you're an angel. Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Rhyming poetry is alive and well in the romantic hearts of poets Emile. I predict it will make a comeback, especially when written with classic lines like you write. I love and am inspired by both rhyming and unrhymed poetry. We need to embrace both styles. I enjoyed this wonderful expressive piece Emile! 7
Pinet Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Thanks so Connie, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 5:13 PM
I'm with you on this one. It does seem to be out of fashion, which I simply can't understand. Nevertheless, I think it's sound advice to "visit it once in a while" to keep it alive. In the long view, I think rhymed poems will always be a staple of the writing community, critically acclaimed or not.
Pinet Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thanks so much Preston, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Horsman Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 3:17 PM
brilliant message awesome poetry..rhyme is well and truly safe while you're around...
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Thanks so much Harry, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Smith Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 3:07 PM
I love a good rhyme....to much free style detracts from the message of the poem...excellent Emile
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Thanks Tim, as always your comments are welcome. Emile.
Hopper Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 2:48 PM
I can't get over how good this poem is. Gah! From the first line until the last! I am just in awe! Adding to favorites! Sorry for so many posts! God bless!
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:43 PM
My smile just keeps on growing, thanks again Anna. Emile.
Hopper Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 2:46 PM
It may not have been what I wanted to hear, but omg it was so clever and such a beautiful flow. This is 10 star poetry in my book! Of coarse I am giving it a 7. Is it really critiqued that bad though?.. I was hoping to go somewhere :(... One day, maybe lol
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Anna, once more I am basking in your praise, thanks so much. Emile.
Hopper Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 2:44 PM
First of all, really? I love the rhythm of a good rhyming poem! I couldn't write poetry that didn't rhyme if I tried. For that reason, I view it as requiring more talent. Secondly, I label pretty much everything I write "free verse". They always rhyme though. I don't know all of the rules of poetry. I pick up pieces here and there and test them out. I guess it is easier to not label it. That way I can't be wrong lol. Thirdly, this poem is SUPER EXCELLENT!
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 4:40 PM
Thanks so much Anna, I am humbled by your abundant praise. Emile.
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