Rhymes

long as it rhymes an staggers in time, an poetry is yes, inspiration, you can check for a bit, of bull in me line, poetry comes from thought distillation, produces wine or a whine, till the cementry chimes, words come on the next inhalation, sometimes... Thanks to Laura Breidenthal Jerkasauras... Don

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/7/2012 2:45:00 PM

Nicely rhymed Don,

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2012 1:27:00 PM

Great one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Glad to learn that you have crows who take care of the dead in Australia..The crows here will eat freshly killed animal some along with grubs, worms, bugs, and my husband newly planted corn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/7/2012 3:56:00 AM

Some great lines there Don. No matter how far up the tree One looks down but can always see Not only someone below me too Someone far above who look like you x

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/5/2012 8:26:00 PM

Your flipping awesome!!! :D Love this verse. I rate it a seven without hesiotation. Thanks for making me smile today. Always, Laura

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/5/2012 9:29:00 AM

Wow what inspiration, while being under distillation, when I'm full of inhalation...ha ha, just a bit of humor! I really enjoyed your write this morning! Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/5/2012 4:05:00 AM

yes, as good as wine.. vintage and sweet rhyme, don.. :) huggs!

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 2/5/2012 2:50:00 AM

You are a wordsmith Don be in no doubt of that a very good one too Mate!