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RHYME TIME III - CHRISTMAS The unique shape of each frosty snowflake, tapping on the window, as cookies bake. I can smell the buttery sugar and Winter break, Grandma’s batter creamed with sunny yolks. Old-fashioned buggies arrive carrying folks. The horses shake with bells and ladies’ cloaks, as snow thickens on branches of old-timer oaks. Broad smiling and busy hands, carrying platters - turkey, ham, and fixings with holiday clatter. Such a peaceful time where only love matters. Blissful, ruddy faces with winsome chatter. Kids tugging on Santa’s whiskers to test if he is daddy or Uncle John. So blessed by a red velvet bag, gifting the best, and yet there in the crèche- a beloved guest. All bow their heads for the thanksgiving prayer, remembering the spirit of one so rare. A star that led shepherds and magi to share a moment with the savior, who created with care the unique shape of each frosty snowflake. 12/12/2017 Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time III Contest

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Date: 12/26/2017 1:05:00 AM
perfect for this time of year dear Kim! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo! Hugs Kim!
Date: 12/25/2017 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your fine win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal! <3
Date: 12/25/2017 5:32:00 PM
you painted such a delightful Christmas scene Kim:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan!
Date: 12/25/2017 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations my Dear, on a fine win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 12/13/2017 12:54:00 PM
It is like you took me there with your words, like a christmas card.. well written Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Silent! <3
Date: 12/13/2017 7:44:00 AM
A magnificent poem of festive joy among family and friends--you did this well Kim--your poem is a joy to read--this poem must win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 7:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! <3 :)
Date: 12/13/2017 4:33:00 AM
Kim, I really enjoyed your wonderful depiction of a family Christmas celebration. Best of luck. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, John! :)
Date: 12/13/2017 2:11:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. You took me to Tara, Rockwell, Kincade (sp?, Thomas), books and movies - the whole Holiday montage of early, successful American families, then transported me on, so smoothly to the night of Jesus' birth. The feel truly took me, delighted and in Jesus, awed me. Love this ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 5:35:00 AM
Thanks so much CayCay! Your comment made me smile! <3

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