Rhododendrons

In neat formations
rhododendrons guard
the half acre order
of our mountain block
and rush their unreal colour
into a landscape just emerging
from winter's cold.

They seem out of place
in the green - brown encirclements 
of native bush where beneath
towering eucalypts 
only an odd acacia accents 
the understory shade
in tiny globules
of palest yellow.

Soon summer will bleach colour
from a drying world.
Borders will wilt
as the bush draws closer.
Here, coiled 
in the shadows of long days,
life sinks
to a shallow pant.
An uneasy quiet 
is menaced by siren wails
and heat.

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Date: 12/12/2022 11:40:00 PM
My daughter gave me one last year. Hopefully it will compliment all the other beautiful things in our garden before too long. Australia has a proud tradition in the field of poetry and you may one day be part of that with your ability to soften what can be harsh yet paint a picture that is true to life. Though no Ausie has ever done justice to what is our side of the ditch. All the best David in NZ
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Paul Willason
Date: 12/14/2022 2:56:00 AM
My grandfather was from NZ so maybe I inherited from him a way of seeing things in the more muted and kindly light as experienced across the Tasman. Although I must confess when I wss there I suffered from too much green...longed for the brown vistas of a dry landscape. Thanks David for yr comments, very much appreciated.
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