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Rhapsody of Rain

charcoal clouds curl up monsoon dark sky turns to slate… wild wind waits awhile charmed clouds descend low dance in rhapsody of rain… trees swing in cadence soaked in twilight gleam raindrops roll on rocking leaves… pearl strings lace green face June 4, 2020 Contest : Hi-Ku(3) Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 6/8/2020 9:06:00 PM
Subimal, you have penned some beautiful words, so apt for haiku...dance in rhapsody of rain....soaked in twilight gleam...wonderful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/7/2020 10:29:00 AM
I like these and can relate as I spent a year in S.E. Asia and know what a monsoon is like--congrats!
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Date: 6/7/2020 9:05:00 AM
Very refreshing! Congrats!
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations! Lovely Haiku!
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Subimal :) loved the melody of raindrops.
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Date: 6/6/2020 6:58:00 AM
what lovely haiku Subimal many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/4/2020 6:46:00 AM
Lovely haiku. I enjoy writing and reading these. Many best wishes for a win. Love and prayers sent your way, Gina
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