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i long to hold you like a poet holds their pen caress you gently beneath the linger of thoughts as they fall from the depths of mind play with you like a poet plays with words in the depths of poetry lay you down on sheets of white in the thrusts of metaphor like a poem then rewrite you again through breathless sighs written 9/25/2019 Best free verse of 2019 Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 2/22/2020 8:26:00 PM
Peaceful pleasant poem.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Pax :) hugs
Date: 1/7/2020 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful - Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, Sandra - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o) <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/8/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such kind words for me to find Greg...hugs and blessings :)
Date: 1/5/2020 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 5:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve... hugs :)
Date: 1/5/2020 1:42:00 PM
Sandy simply beautiful win!;) congratulations!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 1:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 1:39:00 PM
This is a poem I love, and you know that! Congrats Sandy for being in the top for 2019!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 5:39:00 PM
Perhaps I will. I had to pass up some really good ones for line counts :) hugs
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/5/2020 5:15:00 PM
Just a thought for next time, maybe adjust the line count to make it work for the contest? Then after you win....adjust the line count back to how you like it!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 3:40:00 PM
me too ...i had a couple others in mind but they were over the line count... my short little lines make it hard to stay under 30 but wouldn't equal 10 lines of most poet's writes if i adjusted them...i like my little lines though...it's me...
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/5/2020 2:24:00 PM
Yeah too bad I think your cobblestones write was your best last year, too bad it already got a top win in one of my contests!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/5/2020 1:45:00 PM
thank you John...i have others i felt more worthy but they were all over the 30 line limit... Thank you for the win, kind words and always hosting such wonderful contests... your contests have helped me write some beautiful poems this past year... hugs :)
Date: 12/17/2019 5:35:00 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessin! :o) <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Greg... what a kind thing to say.... hugs :)
Date: 12/16/2019 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Sandra
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Greg... hugs
Date: 12/16/2019 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's Contest, Sandy, it is such a pleasure to read this poem again. Hugs, John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 11:06:00 AM
Thank you John... hugs
Date: 10/13/2019 3:44:00 PM
Wonderful read for the 3rd time, hey check out the top 100 all time on the soup, this amazing poem found it's place, imagine how high it will climb as it gets more views, I think it's around 70 and going up!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/13/2019 4:07:00 PM
Actually 81
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/13/2019 3:53:00 PM
wow, thank you for the news John...i will have to go look, it still gets views and comments here and there....to think i wasn't sure if i liked it when i first posted it and almost took it back down.... hugs
Date: 10/8/2019 7:14:00 AM
Beautifully sensuous poem, Sandra. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your well deserved POTD.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Line...it was one of my more simple poems :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra on this well-deserved recognition. This beautiful poem left me a little out of breath! Regards, Dean
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 9:28:00 AM
thank you Dean, for your visit and lovely comment!
Date: 9/30/2019 11:43:00 PM
Belated congratulations, Sandra :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much :) hugs
Date: 9/28/2019 5:59:00 PM
This delightful poem really made me smile Sandra. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! It is very deserving! I loved the metaphors. This little gem is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie, I am honored and humbled by your words... hugs :)
Date: 9/28/2019 3:57:00 PM
Wow Sandra - what a truly beautiful comparison between a sheet of white paper and white sheets where love lingers - love this poem - congratulations on POTD, a truly deserved honor! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennie...sometimes the quick scribbles without thought turn out best :) hugs
Date: 9/28/2019 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Sandy on the POTD, no wonder you won it with this little gem! so succulent a piece full of passion, sensuality and love indeed. hugs, Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon, what a kind thing to say... hugs :)
Date: 9/28/2019 12:39:00 AM
Sandra, so beautifully penned, your poem is truly breathless, congratulations on your deserving POTD !
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/28/2019 5:10:00 AM
Thank you dear heart :) hugs
Date: 9/28/2019 12:08:00 AM
A unique imagination.... Wonderful start " I long to hold you like a poet holds their pen" Congrats on POTD!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/28/2019 5:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much :)
Date: 9/27/2019 5:48:00 PM
Visually succulent and creative writing. Congrats on poem of the day !! Love it !!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Debra :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 5:27:00 PM
Ok what more can I say. Congrats on POTD stunning writing getting all the deserved accolades!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much John...to think i almost deleted this one when i first put it out there...Your comments always make me smile :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 4:29:00 PM
This is playful, passionate and sensual- all at the same time. Ahhh, yes!!! I love this Side of Art. :) I can see that you do too. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Brandy...yes i love the word play and metaphoric approaches...it makes it fun...love when poetry allows the reader to draw their own conclusion :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 2:06:00 PM
Damn.... Another amazing poem... Very sensual and romantic.. congratulations on potd..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend...not my usual, i know, every now and then i throw some romance out there :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 1:49:00 PM
oh my! amazing poem sweet Sandy, well deserved honor :) -luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Luloo...i was actually shocked when i found out :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 12:23:00 PM
Your words evoke such romanticism and beauty. So lovely and deserving of POTD a fav.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne, your kind words made me smile tonight :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 12:06:00 PM
Back to Congrats!!! on this spectacular verse my friend...glad it made POTD!!!...^WW^ :o)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:45:00 PM
Thank you WW...my muse kind of did this one on her own, i was trying to type for a contest and the pages stayed blank.. then i gave in :) hugs
Date: 9/27/2019 11:45:00 AM
Just back from my travels to find this well deserved poem honoured with POTD. Nice one Sandra and congrats. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom...sometimes i pen softer tones then my normal ....hugs :)
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