Revolving

You can not force music and our souls apart. 
The two form a permanent band allowing the music 
to enter your body, and your body to hold the music.
Your appetite for peace, joy and dreams steadily grows. 
You become one. 
Your spirit
Your body
The music.

(For Dr. Rham Meta's Music and Meditation, By Kristen Bruni)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/26/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Kristen. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:47:00 AM
Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Kristen. Lainie
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Date: 4/22/2011 8:24:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, to say so much with few words is an art form I think
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:14:00 AM
Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )
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Date: 4/22/2011 12:54:00 AM
Heartiest Congratulations Kristen on this wonderful win.Love,Gautami
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:05:00 PM
Glad to see this one tonight. Congratulations for your poem's super win!
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:31:00 PM
beautiul Kristen. Super congrats to you for this win.
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:39:00 PM
Hi! Kristen, how are you?? i see your doing good here on the soup... congrats! here... sure enjoyed your poem,,, p.d.
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:32:00 PM
You are sooooo correct here. Music is held within our bodies. That's where the power in it lies. Congrats with this winning poem. The title is echoed nicely thru out. Happy Easter! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congrats Kristen on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest with this energetic entry luv.. enjoy your 3rd place with luv .. intense...
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kristen. Excellent piece. Nice going. Happy Easter. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:22:00 PM
love love love this! Keep on writing!
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:53:00 PM
Way to go Kristen, Congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful one Kristen. Congratulations on your fine 3rd Place win in Dr. Ram's Contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/21/2011 2:43:00 PM
lovely sentiments, congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, kristen
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Date: 4/17/2011 7:33:00 AM
I love writing about music, and I see that you do to. Music is like our poetry...just as you say in this poem...spirit, body are one. That is just how I feel about it too! Thank you so much Kristen, for the honor of choosing my poem for your Soul Tunes contest.....I am so happy you liked it! I have to say it was hard to choose which music to write about...I love so many kinds. I am so grateful you liked this one. Thank you very much!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/16/2011 7:18:00 PM
Best of luck in Rams contest Kristen, and thanks so much for giving recongnition to my poem in your contest, much appreciated~~
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:03:00 PM
thankxx Kristen for my placement in your Soul Tunes contest for my entry "Magic in the Music"..it was so fun to write a new piece for your theme...I am having issues judging my own contest "RAZZLE DAZZLE" tonight but u are definitely one of my winners for your entry.. this is the first time have had issues judging with the screen so messed up .. hopefully will be fixed so can post my winners tomorrow... appreciate the luv..
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Date: 4/16/2011 10:07:00 AM
Thanks for the entry, kristen
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:02:00 AM
* wow * this is sooo beautiful * i love the message * i love the music * i love the dreams it bears * wonderful * love sarah
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