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Revolving

You can not force music and our souls apart. 
The two form a permanent band allowing the music 
to enter your body, and your body to hold the music.
Your appetite for peace, joy and dreams steadily grows. 
You become one. 
Your spirit
Your body
The music.

(For Dr. Rham Meta's Music and Meditation, By Kristen Bruni)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 26, 2011 at 10:31 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Kristen. Love, Carol

Elaine George

April 24, 2011 at 11:47 AM

Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Kristen. Lainie

Erin Beckett

April 22, 2011 at 8:24 AM

Absolutely beautiful, to say so much with few words is an art form I think

Jack Horne

April 22, 2011 at 4:14 AM

Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )

Gautami Phookan

April 22, 2011 at 12:54 AM

Heartiest Congratulations Kristen on this wonderful win.Love,Gautami

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2011 at 11:05 PM

Glad to see this one tonight. Congratulations for your poem's super win!

Tahera Mannan

April 21, 2011 at 9:31 PM

beautiul Kristen. Super congrats to you for this win.

Poet Destroyer A

April 21, 2011 at 7:39 PM

Hi! Kristen, how are you?? i see your doing good here on the soup... congrats! here... sure enjoyed your poem,,, p.d.

Gwendolen Song

April 21, 2011 at 5:32 PM

You are sooooo correct here. Music is held within our bodies. That's where the power in it lies. Congrats with this winning poem. The title is echoed nicely thru out. Happy Easter! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 21, 2011 at 5:05 PM

Congrats Kristen on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest with this energetic entry luv.. enjoy your 3rd place with luv .. intense...

Ralph Taylor

April 21, 2011 at 5:04 PM

Congrats on your win, Kristen. Excellent piece. Nice going. Happy Easter. xxxRalph

Cherilyn Fry

April 21, 2011 at 4:22 PM

love love love this! Keep on writing!

Sara Kendrick

April 21, 2011 at 4:20 PM

Congratulations on your win with your creative work..Sara

John Freeman

April 21, 2011 at 3:53 PM

Way to go Kristen, Congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

April 21, 2011 at 3:16 PM

Beautiful one Kristen. Congratulations on your fine 3rd Place win in Dr. Ram's Contest! Love, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

April 21, 2011 at 2:43 PM

lovely sentiments, congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 21, 2011 at 2:32 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, kristen

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2011 at 7:33 AM

I love writing about music, and I see that you do to. Music is like our poetry...just as you say in this poem...spirit, body are one. That is just how I feel about it too! Thank you so much Kristen, for the honor of choosing my poem for your Soul Tunes contest.....I am so happy you liked it! I have to say it was hard to choose which music to write about...I love so many kinds. I am so grateful you liked this one. Thank you very much!!! Love, Carrie

Constance La France

April 16, 2011 at 7:18 PM

Best of luck in Rams contest Kristen, and thanks so much for giving recongnition to my poem in your contest, much appreciated~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 16, 2011 at 5:03 PM

thankxx Kristen for my placement in your Soul Tunes contest for my entry "Magic in the Music"..it was so fun to write a new piece for your theme...I am having issues judging my own contest "RAZZLE DAZZLE" tonight but u are definitely one of my winners for your entry.. this is the first time have had issues judging with the screen so messed up .. hopefully will be fixed so can post my winners tomorrow... appreciate the luv..