Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Revolution

Suits, smiling & svelte
between
the sunshiny glass,
spinning…

Spinning fast, the Suits
near the speed of light,

cartoonish in fact.

I get caught up
in their whirlwind -

animated by the
out of control
maneuvering.

Caught in the matrix,
I laugh
as my cell rings.

…ready for a revolution
dark glasses intact.

Artificial Intelligence,
its satellite department
on the phone.

I am carried away,
still spinning -
spinning fast,
near the speed of light.

I see you
through Alice’s glass.
You look smart
in your coat and slacks.

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Duke Beaufort March 19, 2024 at 11:42 AM Kim, are we ready for all this? I think you make this seem real. Although humorous, you raise so very valid concerns. Things are about to change very quickly...and it may have a lot of negatives for many. Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2024 at 2:53 PM We will see what the future brings…

Panagiota Romios March 14, 2024 at 5:24 PM This write has multiple meanings and showcases your versatilty as a poetess of honor and standing! Pangie Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2024 at 5:38 PM I appreciate you so much, Pangie! Thank you!

Paige Hind March 13, 2024 at 6:06 PM Whoah, this is interesting, Kim. I think you've done something to my mind, lol. Great, if it can be called that, work! Wow, go Kim. <3 Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 6:14 PM LOL! Something good I hope…lol!

Bill Baker March 13, 2024 at 5:40 PM Seems like a whimsical dream, Kim. The spinning could represent a feeling of being out of control in your daily life and noticing the person (probably yourself in a mirror as you whirled by) in the smart coat and slacks, (or a person of interest) was your exit back into reality. Either way, a fun uninhibited poetic rumble. You have an interesting mind to me, my friend. Hugs, Bill Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 6:12 PM Thanks, Bill! I love your interpretation! Hugs ~ Kim

David Fisher March 13, 2024 at 5:20 PM This is such a fun romp of a poem; such unexpected happenings between mayhem and clothes, and... Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 6:11 PM Thank you, David! A fun romp…thanks!

Joanna Daniel March 13, 2024 at 8:17 AM Wonderfully described, Kim:) Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 10:13 AM Thank you, Joanna!

Brian Sambourne March 13, 2024 at 6:41 AM Hello Kim. What a superb write. I especially like the allusion to Alice Through the Looking Glass. Smart, sharp lines on the Suits in a 'whirlwind' around us. Best wishes, Brian Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 10:13 AM Thank you, Brian!

Shadow Hamilton March 12, 2024 at 8:19 PM what a fun write Kim love it ty for your prayers during my recent illness its so good to be back hugs Shadow Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 5:24 AM Hugs-a-million, sweet one…so glad your illness is behind you. Prayers for wonderful days ahead. Thank you!

Gershon Wolf March 12, 2024 at 7:55 PM You wit is now one-hundred percent 'dry-cleaned.' ~ Tilt Awhirl Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2024 at 5:26 AM LOL! Saw some fun and wild “Suits” yesterday. They inspired my poem ;) Hugs

Sam Kauffman March 12, 2024 at 3:56 PM Kim, got dizzy reading your poem! Great descriptions of "revolutions!" Best wishes for the contest! Blessings. Hope you get your balance back soon! Wonderful imagery! Love the line "I see you through Alice's glass." Great image. Kim Rodrigues March 12, 2024 at 5:49 PM Thank you, Sam! :)