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Revolution

Suits, smiling & svelte between the sunshiny glass, spinning… Spinning fast, the Suits near the speed of light, cartoonish in fact. I get caught up in their whirlwind - animated by the out of control maneuvering. Caught in the matrix, I laugh as my cell rings. …ready for a revolution dark glasses intact. Artificial Intelligence, its satellite department on the phone. I am carried away, still spinning - spinning fast, near the speed of light. I see you through Alice’s glass. You look smart in your coat and slacks.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/19/2024 11:42:00 AM

Kim, are we ready for all this? I think you make this seem real. Although humorous, you raise so very valid concerns. Things are about to change very quickly...and it may have a lot of negatives for many.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 2:53:00 PM

We will see what the future brings…

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/14/2024 5:24:00 PM

This write has multiple meanings and showcases your versatilty as a poetess of honor and standing! Pangie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2024 5:38:00 PM

I appreciate you so much, Pangie! Thank you!

Paige Hind

Date: 3/13/2024 6:06:00 PM

Whoah, this is interesting, Kim. I think you've done something to my mind, lol. Great, if it can be called that, work! Wow, go Kim. <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 6:14:00 PM

LOL! Something good I hope…lol!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 5:40:00 PM

Seems like a whimsical dream, Kim. The spinning could represent a feeling of being out of control in your daily life and noticing the person (probably yourself in a mirror as you whirled by) in the smart coat and slacks, (or a person of interest) was your exit back into reality. Either way, a fun uninhibited poetic rumble. You have an interesting mind to me, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 6:12:00 PM

Thanks, Bill! I love your interpretation! Hugs ~ Kim

David Fisher

Date: 3/13/2024 5:20:00 PM

This is such a fun romp of a poem; such unexpected happenings between mayhem and clothes, and...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, David! A fun romp…thanks!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/13/2024 8:17:00 AM

Wonderfully described, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/13/2024 6:41:00 AM

Hello Kim. What a superb write. I especially like the allusion to Alice Through the Looking Glass. Smart, sharp lines on the Suits in a 'whirlwind' around us. Best wishes, Brian

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank you, Brian!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/12/2024 8:19:00 PM

what a fun write Kim love it ty for your prayers during my recent illness its so good to be back hugs Shadow

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 5:24:00 AM

Hugs-a-million, sweet one…so glad your illness is behind you. Prayers for wonderful days ahead. Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2024 7:55:00 PM

You wit is now one-hundred percent 'dry-cleaned.' ~ Tilt Awhirl

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2024 5:26:00 AM

LOL! Saw some fun and wild “Suits” yesterday. They inspired my poem ;) Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/12/2024 4:27:00 PM

a very descriptive poem, dear Kim! Loved these lines: Caught in the matrix, I laugh as my cell rings. …ready for a revolution dark glasses intact. Nicely done and creative...have a splendid evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2024 5:49:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! :) Have a wonderful evening!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/12/2024 3:56:00 PM

Kim, got dizzy reading your poem! Great descriptions of "revolutions!" Best wishes for the contest! Blessings. Hope you get your balance back soon! Wonderful imagery! Love the line "I see you through Alice's glass." Great image.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2024 5:49:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! :)