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Reverse Graffiti

light 
                             bending and refracting 
paints the cosmos 
                             auroras bow 
moon dances
                             casting shadows 
light awaits            
                             as the universe bends

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Linda Alice Fowler May 6, 2024 at 7:28 AM I like the flow of this Suzanne. Congratulations! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot May 5, 2024 at 2:17 PM you've formed a lovely poem out of the given text - congrats on your win in the contest :)

Crystol Woods May 5, 2024 at 9:16 AM Beautiful..congratulations Suzanne Delaney May 5, 2024 at 9:35 AM Thanks Crystol.

Richard Lamoureux April 29, 2024 at 2:00 PM Cool!;0) Suzanne Delaney May 5, 2024 at 5:30 AM Thanks, Rich. I enjoyed playing with this one.

Duke Beaufort April 28, 2024 at 2:27 PM Suzanne, the entire concept of this poem is intriguing. Making something beautiful happens in this odd universe we live in. At least we can appreciate it! It's remarkable that we have the tools to see all these things. Suzanne Delaney May 5, 2024 at 5:32 AM Thanks Duke. It was for a contest ‘to find a poem’ in a paragraph of text. Read many beautiful versions of Reverse Graffiti in the Contests/ Status column on the left of the site page.

Kim Rodrigues April 17, 2024 at 10:42 AM Nice setup! Suzanne Delaney April 17, 2024 at 12:04 PM Thanks, Kim I appreciate your comments. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2024 at 7:31 AM Your "Reverse Graffiti" is a creative write. Love your pretty picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest.  Enjoy your spring day writing away................... Suzanne Delaney April 15, 2024 at 10:11 AM Hi Paula: Thanks so much for your welcome comment. It is good to be back writing again. Hugs, SuZ

Silent One April 13, 2024 at 9:12 AM You did this really well.. Nice arrangement of words.. Suzanne Delaney April 13, 2024 at 10:53 AM Thanks Si: I used to go to a site on wavepoetry that had an Erasures interactive tool. It doesn’t open anymore. I like doing blackout poetry in old books. Words are so revealing. Best, SuZ