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Reverie In Colours

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April 13, 2021

First Place
Changing Colours Premiere Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet

Ten Colour-words Used: aquamarine, crimson, lilac, tangerine, saffron, lemon, chartreuse, coral, lavender, watermelon

        Aquamarine horizon with crimson hue,
                                   Unfolds a sublime picture of dawn,
        Drowns my senses in tender lilac dreams,
                                   Sways me away to a mythical land unknown.

       Lose myself in a tranquil tangerine reverie,
                                  Spring birds merrily cooing songs serenade,
       Saffron imagination dawns on my dreamy eyes,
                                 Fantasy a magical garden, sprinkling faint lemon scent.

        Swirling all vibrant colours of rainbow in palette,
                                 Fragrant petite graceful flowers wake me up,
        Chartreuse waterfalls falls soft on coral rocks
                                  Lavender yearning fills my passionate heart.

       Watermelon marvels of life mystifies the beauty of our existence,
            Doting sleep whispers faraway dreams gently on my eyes.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2025 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Awesome picture from which you wrote your poem. Sara K

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/31/2024 2:25:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. May God bless you with a prosperous New Year.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/31/2024 8:41:00 AM

Dear Beata, Thank you so much for reading, and for your lovely comment. I feel really inspired with such great comments. Wish you a wonderful Happy New Year filled with joy, peace and good health. Love always ~ Mala

JCB Brul

Date: 4/19/2021 11:27:00 PM

So breathtakingly beautiful! Congratulations dear Mala for your awesome win with this exemplary creation with colours.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/20/2021 6:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Friend. The placement is an honour indeed! I am glad you enjoyed! Love ~ Mala

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2021 12:47:00 PM

This is gorgeous! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! You managed to include all the colors with the ease of brilliance. Blessings

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2021 3:02:00 PM

Thanks, Connie. It was challenging, but feel honoured with the placement. Really appreciate your encouraging words. Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/19/2021 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write and picture. I love it. Have a blessed day..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2021 3:00:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. So glad to know you have enjoyed! Love ~ Mala

Marilene Evans

Date: 4/19/2021 9:59:00 AM

Mala, congratulations. Beautiful, wonderful, colorful poem.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2021 10:07:00 AM

Thanks, Marilene. It is an honour. Appreciate your congratulatory words. BW ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/19/2021 9:26:00 AM

Mala, congratulations and plumes of colorful kudos to you for your win in Emile's contest! I thought I had commented when I first read this gem! Beautiful phrases and images. You really set the mood. So happy to see it on the winners list! Much love in colorful blessings to you!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Friend. After I read yours, I was not very hopeful. Congratulations to you for your placement with the stunning poem - the vibrant and colourful images of the gemstone are fabulous. Love ~ Mala

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/19/2021 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations Mala! Your poem has placed "Second" in my color changing contest. This was all a bit of colorful fun, and your entertaining poem filled that role nicely and incorporated the colors well throughout, well done my friend, Emile.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2021 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Emile. I am very very excited - your contest was a challenge and I really appreciate my placement - very inspiring. BW ~ Mala

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2021 4:09:00 PM

I just love these brilliant flashes of nirvana that characterize these 'color-poems.' --- All the more so, since I myself am simply incapable of penning them. Hats off to you, Mala. Smiles, Gershon

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2021 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Your comments inspire me. You are capable of writing brilliant poems with stunning images - that has been proved innumerable times, Dear Friend. BW ~ Mala