Reverie

Reverie


smooth
sometimes I wonder
is this a living world?
no movement
no horizon
January
out on the bay
dog team hunkered down
like fur drifts 
they sleep warm 
as I,
laying back on the sled,
contemplate
the  glare of
nothingness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 2:58 AM
I love this little poem - it has an unique quality about it. The reader is left wondering: is it you on the sled or are you imagining the sled ride? Whichever way, you make it sound so very agreeable! :) john P.s I concur with Line...it is all so very dreamy -- in such a desirable way! :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Beautiful dreamy poem.
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