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Revenge Is Right and a Delight

____I tried something new this time. Rhyming rhymes in every line______ So it's not my normal style of poem. Let me know what you think Thanks Softly spoken and heartbroken From his stunning ways of cunning Her believing he's not leaving Now she's hurting from his flirting Never knowing he'll be blowing Through her life causing this strife Treated this way he will pay When she finds and unwinds His whole existence with persistence She'll destroy his only joy It's no chore attacking the core Her childness stops this wildness When her fit drops bit by bit Each new trickle stops his "pickle" From more damage he would manage Stopping him his world grows dim In the dark no sexy spark Since her plan has stopped a man From causing pain now he's insane Lost and lonely now he's only Getting scareder with a mirror An open book from each look Shows mistakes as he takes It all in and he begins To figure out life's all about Respecting those who become close And the fleeting love from cheating Doesn't work and he's a jerk Now it's late to recreate A new man who understands This lesson about all the messin' With frail hearts right from the start Alone in bed he knows the dread That was tossed from all the loss No one forgiving now he's living With no one from what he's done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/19/2014 5:48:00 AM
It seems to have a rap quality to it..I think it is called internal rhyme..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:26:00 PM
Rhyming within every line is quite a task to have set yourself, but I think you did it with much success. Much better than I manage to achieve with rhyme. Well Done!
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Date: 1/10/2014 4:17:00 PM
WOW a powerful write here all lain in layer perspetive, enjoyed going through each layer vision and emotion with you. thank you for the journey. Also thank you for your comments on my GEISHIA WRITe i wrote it for my daughter amanda. cheri
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