Robin Davis Poet Rhyme

Revenge Is Right and a Delight

____I tried something new this time.  Rhyming rhymes in every line______ So it's not
my normal style of poem.   Let me know what you think    Thanks  


Softly spoken and heartbroken
From his stunning ways of cunning
Her believing he's not leaving
Now she's hurting from his flirting
Never knowing he'll be blowing
Through her life causing this strife
Treated this way he will pay
When she finds and unwinds
His whole existence with persistence
She'll destroy his only joy
It's no chore attacking the core
Her childness stops this wildness
When her fit drops bit by bit
Each new trickle stops his "pickle"
From more damage he would manage
Stopping him his world grows dim
In the dark no sexy spark
Since her plan has stopped a man
From causing pain now he's insane
Lost and lonely now he's only
Getting scareder with a mirror
An open book from each look
Shows mistakes as he takes
It all in and he begins
To figure out life's all about
Respecting those who become close
And the fleeting love from cheating
Doesn't work and he's a jerk
Now it's late to recreate
A new man who understands
This lesson about all the messin'
With frail hearts right from the start
Alone in bed he knows the dread
That was tossed from all the loss
No one forgiving now he's living
With no one from what he's done

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Sara Kendrick January 19, 2014 at 5:48 AM It seems to have a rap quality to it..I think it is called internal rhyme..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Scott Thirtyseven January 12, 2014 at 4:26 PM Rhyming within every line is quite a task to have set yourself, but I think you did it with much success. Much better than I manage to achieve with rhyme. Well Done!

Cherl Dunn January 10, 2014 at 4:17 PM WOW a powerful write here all lain in layer perspetive, enjoyed going through each layer vision and emotion with you. thank you for the journey. Also thank you for your comments on my GEISHIA WRITe i wrote it for my daughter amanda. cheri