Revelation

All morning
the river wore a thick fog
along its length, until 
a great looming shape emerged,
tall, gliding almost soundlessly
towards me, becoming the bow 
of a ship parting the fog, 
escorted by two tug boats 
churning the water,
the deep throb of their diesel
engines sending a shudder
through the air. 

The sheer wall
of the ships hull slowly passed,
tapering to a stern and trailing
a wheeling throng of seagulls
in its wake, their bright wings
catching a column of sunlight
that had suddenly broken through 
the fog, freeing what was there
hidden in the unseen
to come forth into the known.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 12:20 PM
Dear Paul, your depiction of the river shrouded in fog, only to reveal a majestic ship cutting through the mist, is a profound revelation of the unseen becoming known. The imagery of the tug boats and the seagulls adds to the sense of wonder and awe. I loved how your words invite us to embrace moments of revelation with open hearts and minds. Blessings, Daniel.
Willason Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 2:26 AM
Again, exquisite exploration my friend...you really have a talent. Thankyou for spending so much of yr time knee deep in this poem. Valued...
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Your poems usually leave me wanting more, but this one more than ever before. What did you see, or you leaving that to your reader's imaginations?
Willason Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 2:23 AM
Thanks Lin. Forgive the delay in reply....I'll rely on your imagination to furnish a few possibilities...got to preserve some mystery my dear Lin. Take care...
M  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Love it Paul….the last line is a beauty…tying the poem together! Debx
Willason Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 2:19 AM
Much appreciate your kind words Deb, thankyou...
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