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Reunion In An Hourglass

winds blew strong erasing warm sandcastles and late promises once written on the sand Nothing left to show their dreams except fresh marks of his footprints and the voice of unfading summer calling out for her beloved's return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/29/2015 12:54:00 PM
You wrote this so beautifully, Charma! I love your title for it, so fitting! I especially love the second to the last line. How was your Christmas? How's sweet Christina? Wishing you, and your lovely family a blessed Christmas and New Year! sending you hugs!
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful. I just love seeing you do this form!
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:22:00 AM
Such a lovely poem tinged with sadness, as dreams get wind-erased. But finally there is also a feeling of hope. #7 All the best. // paul
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:29:00 PM
Dear Charmaine Inspirational pic my friend, a wonderful poem of loving, romantically sweet, excellent piece, glad I stopped to read this I'll read it to my hubby tonight, and show him the pic, cheri
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Date: 9/26/2015 5:53:00 PM
Very nice Charmaine and clever. Late promises and empty promises causes partners to walk away. Sad love ruined by empty words..
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Date: 9/26/2015 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful!!!I loved the untamed longing of her heart and the voice of the unfading summer to desperately wait for her beloved's return.
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Date: 9/26/2015 6:19:00 AM
how languid in its expression of longing, charms... truly beautiful!.. huggs
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Date: 9/26/2015 6:07:00 AM
There is sadness here Charma. Dreams blown away but a sense of hope that he returns to her.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/27/2015 9:00:00 AM
Love the picture

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