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8/20/2025 for Two Seven Four Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

Each day,
I wake -
within,
a hope
for warm,
sunny,
blue skies;

and like 
flower
petals,
with care,
slowly  
open
my eyes.

Today,
I see,
just like
many
days ere, 
dark clouds,
and so,

I sigh, 
"I thought,
I got 
away -
yet, once
again,
laid low".

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Date: 8/20/2025 10:17:00 PM
I tend to sleep in on such days. LOL Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, David. Bill
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