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Returning (Englyn)

Cold engulfed her flesh when she lastly reached this old house forsaken; lilac scent has awakened at yesterday's ghost's haven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/29/2008 11:59:00 AM
Interesting use of this challenging form. Much to think about in your words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/29/2008 6:36:00 AM
Lilacs are memories of my mom. Great job with this form of poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/28/2008 8:58:00 PM
Nice imagery and you invoked the smell and fright at the same time...
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