Return To Willerton

The cemetery was still but not silent as Ben Braxton leaned against the rough trunk of an ancient oak.  It stood apart from the mourners, yet close enough that he could clearly see and hear them. His gaze locked on the dark-haired woman next to the grave site. It's been a long time, Rachelle. Too long since I've been back. He looked down and wiped at his eyes with the back of his hand.

     The giant oak spread its roots in a huge circle beneath his feet and its curvy gnarled limbs stretched over the meadow as though laying claim to everything within the reach of its broad shadow.  In the late afternoon on this October day, that shadow seemed to embrace all those who wept. As the priest bowed his head and said his last words of prayer over the coffin, Ben sighed and silently joined them in weeping.  Perhaps coming back to Willerton was a mistake.

     As if in answer to his doubt, thunder roared. Ben looked up to see perilous black storm clouds drifting overhead. The wind wound its way through the oak's branches, whispering like the rustling of silk, and filling Ben's mind with fear and sadness. He turned the collar of his coat up around his neck and listened. If he hadn't known better, he'd swear the gruff voice in his mind was that of his longtime friend, Jake Kehrer. But that was impossible, now that Jake was dead.
     


September 22, 2022
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Fowler Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 4:04 PM
I so want to know what happens after this intriguing introduction Jenna. Keep pn penning! Linda
Flood Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 11:45 AM
Grabbing the readers interest in chapter one is essential in any novel. Doing so in three verses takes some serious skill, but you achieved both in this smashing write, Jenna. I suspect congratulations will be in order. Terry
Logan Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 5:44 AM
Thanks so very much for your compliments, Terry. I wish I had the patience and fortitude to continue those 3 paragraphs.
Parker Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 12:21 PM
really well written Jenna, his presence was felt by his friend, I felt like the oak tree symbolized the strength of their friendship...
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Your insight is clever. Thanks for your supportive ideas, Frederick.
Parker Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 11:13 AM
....and the rest of the story.... Cool, Jenna. ;o)
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 7:13 PM
It’s a possibility, Arlo. Thanks.
Hankins Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 9:37 AM
More...more...more! This is a good start, and I think you should by all means continue it, Jenna. It should do very well in Matt's contest. You certainly captured my attention!
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 7:12 PM
That would take some serious commitment. Thank you for your encouraging thoughts, Milt.
Tor Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Jenna there must be a sequel to complete I am left in suspense... Nicely written Jenna, you had me glued to your every word...
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 7:11 PM
I’m glad you found it interesting, Michael. Thanks.
Kyser Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:21 AM
I'm ambivalent about this contest. Yours, like others, leaves me wanting to turn to the next page, but sadly, there isn't one! Well done, off to an intriguing start!
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Perhaps there are more pages, Jeff. And the few you’ve read only served to whet your appetite. Thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Brilliant story telling Jenna, but you can't leave us in suspense lol. Tom
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:22 AM
There’s a story with an interesting past between those three protagonists, Tom. That’s for sure. Thanks for finding it to your liking
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