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Dressed in white christening gown Creaky snow break mountain melt Dissolves rigid in simmering spring Ached ankles pummel, putrid pond Ancient decompose steams surface Sulphur syphons Winter hestitance Grabs goblins soup bowl grotesque Monster murky rub manic massage Active agitate upsets puritan sculpt Boiling bubbles bump aside burden Besieged by beast belly, slimy spa Crystallises chartreuse, past spent Dunk of disgusting salve, hot spew Baptises black ducks in inky erupt Aotearoa flow, now zeal spills over Rejuvenating Rotarua - two lakes - 5th January

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Date: 1/6/2025 6:19:00 AM
Had to google Rotorua - sounds like a marvelous place for tourists. Re your piece - Amazing line symmetry with equally awesome alliteration. That can't be easy; your effort and skill are shining here, Sigrid.
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