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From others’ looks and lips And between the rustle of papers I pick up this goody-goody mask. I carry it to the office To the hotel and streets I will not be I there-minus that. And when gravel grate Under my bare and weary feet Gasping for breath in the searing heat To myself I am back Rid of that coward’s mask For it doesn’t go with sweat and dirt. By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair 26 july 2011 Contest: Doppelgangers of Matt Caliri By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair July26, 2011 Contest: Doppelgangers of MattCaliri

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Date: 8/22/2011 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Matt's "Doppelgangers" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 8:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2011 6:37:00 PM
Congrats Jag on another fantastic win with this dynamic poetry and creative entry luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 6:08:00 PM
hey jag congrats on another great win David
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Date: 8/10/2011 8:56:00 PM
Great write!!!!! a pleasure to read..!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/28/2011 9:04:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, S Nair
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Date: 7/26/2011 9:56:00 PM
wow,I LIKE this one a LOT. It could have fit that mask contest a while back very well. I missed that particular contest and will just post my mask poem later for the heck of it. Glad to have seen your poem tonight.
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:43:00 AM
awesomely written JS and well put as to how we adapt one persona for one part of life and another for another part.. excellent on the theme of the contest...good luck luv..
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:46:00 AM
This poem was deep! I liked it.
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