return of the butterflies

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Written using some prompts created by me and silent one for our community page on instagram

My muse is a poetic flower garden,
blooming lilacs in barren meadows,
but I still remember 
how I heeded haunting heartbeats
in paradise, whilst praying 
for your lustrous light,
to descend onto my hazy horizons.

Your eyes like captivating sunsets,
made me dream away, 
recalling shells lost in a forgotten 
coral reef, castaway upon 
an elusive island,
where the paths have no name,
but the oceanic breeze 
      calls yours so softly.

I was killing time, 
                 scribbling elegies
on distant musical shores,
where spotted eagle rays
and flying fish were my only mentors.
Nocturnal reef sharks unfolded tales
beneath lonesome skies,
illustrating a secretive stairway
that would lead me
           to the scintillating stars.

Deep within my heart, 
I knew in the darkest 
night you are the light
that would illuminate 
my breathless sighs
with blazing ballads 
      rewriting my fate, 
            reawakening my 
need to thrive through these 
endless melancholic monsoons;
surfing through vast oceans.
Your cosmic radiance pulled 
this chocolate mermaid,
from the bioluminescent 
ripples of sorrow,
empathising with 
      endless streams from
my volcanic mind 
and harmonious heart,
which was in dire 
need of healing,
from draconian depleted 
ideologies imprinted within 
a labyrinth of
          narcissistic daffodils,  
emanating deceptive fragrances
resembling the devil's disciple,
claiming me as nothing,
but a mere self
confessed queen
on a conquest to conquer
the uncontrollable calling 
to a land of virtual hypocrisy.

If only they knew
I no longer desired 
to rule a kingdom of 
    tumultuous pretense.
I was waiting for the 
return of the butterflies,
tearing apart the fragile 
       walls of its cocoon.

I knew if Romeo did not die,
I would be living Juliet's desires.
I was a poetess 
         searching for 
a purpose,  with no sense 
to shelter,   watching the 
last icicle 
        of winter melt away.

Truth deserves a narrative 
that has no ending,
though I question the universe.
Where do the 
     lost poets reside? 
Is it where the 
moon chooses to hide,
disguising dreariness 
within dazzling blankets 
of dancing moonscapes,
or will this be how 
this sleepless soul
seizes its faultless lunar tide?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/9/2025 12:26:00 PM
wow, I can't believe i have known you at least two years now. This date is 2023!! Never saw it before, but it was sure a good one to enter in the contest. Congrats for your win, Ink.
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Date: 7/8/2025 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 7/8/2025 7:46:00 AM
I was killing time, scribbling elegies on distant musical shores…Congrats, Ink!
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Date: 1/12/2024 11:44:00 AM
Empress Empress. Hi. This is extraordinary and free verse all the way. You mastered free verse here. Truly. I very much love your title and poetic word choices not to mention the thought of where do the lost poets reside. In my eyes the symbol of the butterfly is captured. May your poetic pen be with you always. It was an honor turning to your page and this entry. Have a beautiful night and weekend. Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)
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Date: 12/28/2023 11:44:00 AM
Dearest Inky, back with congratulations for this wistful yet soulful poem that creates poetic magic, my friend! Sending you best wishes for the New Year as we celebrate with the words of poetry and music of our heart! Blessings! You are a source of light in the darkness!
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Date: 12/19/2023 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations! Your poem blooms with hypnotic beauty, each image a kaleidoscope of longing and hope, drawing me into your soul's intricate dance. From ocean depths to celestial heights, your words are spellbinding, leaving me breathless and yearning for the truth your verses whisper. - Blessings, Daniel!
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Date: 12/16/2023 11:43:00 AM
So breathtaking and honest, very personal... I loved the part about "If Romeo did not die"- very deep. You mix your own life with this poem's life. A pleasure!
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Date: 12/15/2023 4:27:00 PM
"Truth deserves a narrative that has no ending..." I like that. I've been a truth seeker my whole adult life, though most of my questions have been answered. As to where all the lost poets go, do you suppose Waldo is a poet? Hmmm
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Date: 12/15/2023 4:28:00 AM
I don't what further could be said to complement the poetic prowess you have displayed here! Oh Ink Empress, your talent seems boundless!
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much truly for your kind and encouraging feedback, grateful always for such sincere support
Date: 12/14/2023 7:51:00 PM
I am swept off my feet in love of your poetry. The longing of a mind craving for its lover's lost love and the dreams it weaves around..... so beautiful and breath taking! One cannot always wear a mask or live in a world of pretenses. The mask has to fall out and the true face exposed . "I no longer desired to rule a kingdom of tumultuous pretense. I was waiting for the return of the butterflies, tearing apart the fragile walls of its cocoon." Matchless in poetic beauty and depth of emotions. Sure FAVE
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:47:00 AM
Ah my dear valsa, your comments always make my day and lift me up immensely, you are like a ray of poetic light and sincerity of your heart can be felt from miles through your comments and poems. Thank you always for being so very supportive i am forever gratefully for your support
Date: 12/14/2023 4:00:00 PM
wow I held my breath through the whole read, permission to exhale lol
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:50:00 AM
Awwn sweet rose you are so kind thank you so very much always for being so supportive
Date: 12/14/2023 3:53:00 PM
your muse is a very talented one, i was fascinated by the first verse ( flower garden), your poem is pure melody for the heart, what a journey in this poem, enjoyed so much, have a sweet day IE
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:55:00 AM
This is such a kind and sweet comment thank you so very much truly for your support. So grateful always
Date: 12/14/2023 10:20:00 AM
Dearest Inky, this poem is a song from the depths of your heart crafted in delicate alliterations and stunning poetic lines - "truth deserves a narrative that has no ending," "chocolate mermaid," "I knew if Romeo had not died I would be living Juliet's desires," "blooming lilacs in barren meadows." What a treasure chest of poetic images as you walk me on your poetic journey. This poem transcends the mere words and lives in a rare place of poetic beauty! Blessings for your journey dear friend!
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Date: 12/15/2023 6:14:00 AM
Ah this comment truly made my soul and heart beam, your feedback is always so warm and generous, so sweet of you to visit my page and leave such an uplifting comment that i truly appreciate. You are like a ray of light always. Hope you’ll always remember that i appreciate you
Date: 12/14/2023 9:43:00 AM
Dear Ink, your poem has a mysterious feel to it that draws me to the great expanse of the water. An unnamed figure is stranded on the beach seeking elusive truths. This riddle emerges as both a perplexing tale and a poem, capturing the attention. The words' mellifluous rhythm, filled with magic, elicits a profound sensation of awe. You expertly combine alliterations and evocative adjectives, prompting a desire to transcend reality and immerse oneself in the universe of these lyrical terms.
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Date: 12/15/2023 6:16:00 AM
Ah dr sotto i always appreciate your comments and thoughtful feedback that always lifts me up, and encourages me truly. Thank you so very much for this profound comment. Im grateful
Date: 12/14/2023 7:55:00 AM
Were these my prompts, surely sound like them.. Especially the poetic garden one... this poem is full of romance and emotions.. The adjectives you have used are beautifully poetic and the light alliterations gives it more proficiency... Where do lost poets reside? Who knows hey... This must be for Brian's contest.. Good luck
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Date: 12/14/2023 7:58:00 AM
Ah yes some of mine and yours, as mentioned on note, its using prompts we made for alt thanks silent one
Date: 12/14/2023 7:08:00 AM
I felt the intensity of emotions you convey throughout.-- Deep within my heart, I knew in the darkest night you are the light--I knew if Romeo did not die, I would be living Juliet's desires.---a powerful dialogue in realms of love--superb as always, Ink.
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Date: 12/15/2023 6:18:00 AM
Ah dear Vijay your comments always lift me up and encourages me to keep sharing and writing i appreciate always all your support, your kindness, i am always grateful for
Date: 12/14/2023 6:46:00 AM
Firstly, this is a FAV for me, dear Ink! What a gorgeous piece you've woven here with so many whimsical imageries waltzing in the tapestries of love and life.. I am absolutely awestruck by the sweet cadence of the lines here along with the metaphorical magic as well.. You've also carved this poem with such gorgeous alliterations and adjectives that just make my soul want to escape to the abode of these words. The reference of Romeo and Juliet is sooo stunning as well.. Gosh, absolutely elegant
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Date: 12/14/2023 6:49:00 AM
"Your cosmic radiance pulled this chocolate mermaid,from the bioluminescent ripples of sorrow,empathising with endless streams from my volcanic mind and harmonious heart", "My muse is a poetic flower garden,blooming lilacs in barren meadows", "I was waiting for the return of the butterflies,tearing apart the fragile walls of its cocoon" - ahh, so many amazing lines here! I want to quote the whole piece.. So magically knitted, dear.. Keep shining and writing always :)
Date: 12/14/2023 6:29:00 AM
This powerful poem has a magical aura that draws me to the ocean. A mystery person is left on the shore, still searching. It is a cryptic story, as well as an enchanting poem.
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Date: 12/14/2023 6:16:00 AM
I don’t normally like reading free verses but this was so good to read . Easy flow . Love it
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