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- Return - a Pleiades -

Richer than noblest wealth
                                rainy quiet morning
                                Ripe thoughts buzz in the brain
                                Roses fearfully thorns
                                Remember when I'm gone
                                rainbow will shine one day
                                ~ reunification







                                                17/04/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                       Pleiades R Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
                                       5th place in the contest
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Babcock Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Wonderful picture. A beautiful spring day outside and sun is shining brightly for us today. Have a wonderful day. Hope you are recovering nicely. love phyl
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:31 PM
A lovely picture accompanies your poem to ponder!
Proxenos Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Hi my dear soul sister , I have been thinking of you. Hope you are well - I love your poem and wish you all the health in the world. Hugs and blessing Sunshine smile - the rainbow matches this name! Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:03 AM
love this beautiful write
Poet Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, I hope you are doing well; I haven't seen any new poems for almost a week; I hope everything is well, and congratulations on your win, warm hugs and regards
Ashley Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 7:19 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, your lovely poetic pen spills vivid imagery that inspires one's heart and soul. Congratulations for your fine win. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Jayasankar Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 7:18 AM
This is so lovely Anne... I wrote on Rainbow... Great imagery and the use of the letter R. Congrats on your win. Have a blessed day dear friend.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
One Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:42 AM
Great use of the letter R here... you do these so well..
DiMino Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 3:57 AM
Beautiful! Perfect!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 6:50 PM
You made this look so easy Anne-Lise. I loved the smooth flow of your Pleiades. I am so happy to see this one a winner. Congratulations my friend. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo
Merryman Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Lovely imagery, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Babcock Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 2:09 PM
A upbeat uplifting poem. love phyl
Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love this write and picture. May you be blessed today and always................
Buhagiar Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 9:45 PM
Let's hope the will be reunification. Perhaps the rainbow is a sign. God bless you.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 5:34 PM
Lovely, lovely writing. God bless you with a win, my friend. Love you, Gina
Y. Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Hi Anne Lise- You've penned such an uplifting write the R. I love rainbow. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis
Faulkner Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Rainbows can lead to gold, in more ways than one! So hopeful and spring like, best wishes for the contest~
Pandit Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Your "R"s are full of imagery, Anne-Lise,--rainbow will shine one day.
Rose  Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Your all about rainbows and smiles dear friend glad I have you in my presence. :)
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 12:42 PM
so beautiful and uplifting I adore rainbows:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcconnell Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Lovely pen Anne-Lise, nice imagery and love the rainbow ??image. Blessings always,Gordon
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