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Fog rises upward Creek gives it needed water Returns rises again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/26/2009 4:05:00 AM
Another lovely Haiku Sara, your on a roll girl>>James
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:39:00 PM
good, it was a pea souper this am wasn't it? did caleb have a good afternoon with ya'll?
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Date: 9/25/2009 1:37:00 PM
Too short. Just kidding. I like the use of spacing in the bottom line. Write more.
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:52:00 PM
I've lived near many creeks described in your words... walked, driven, flown through the fog....Awesome Haiku Sara......:JP]
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:07:00 PM
Good one!
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Date: 9/25/2009 7:42:00 AM
Lovely write to this piece.
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