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Mountains so close they are
Neighbors,
Holding in the bowl of sky,
Keeping at bay the rising sun
Until late in the October
Of falling leaves
And golden larch spires.

Holding that same sun hostage,
Now leaving rose colored
In the darkening,
In the cooling of the day,
In the laying down of 
Frost coating.

We return here to 
This place of wood-riven
Cracked log,
Risen by hand-to set in the 
Cradle of the Swan-Missions.   

Centered-cloistered around
The heat of fire and 
Fire heated stone.
The luxuriant sound of larch
Becoming alive again on its way
To ash.

The quiet within, 
We return.  
To remember what has been,
What could have been,
Suspended between that and tomorrow.

We return to listen to the songs
To listen to the dreaming.
To fill the emptiness with
Desire.

In that returning
We become sated in
That fortress, protected,
Or absolved from the world
Beyond the neighbors of mountains.

To hear that song,
To dream,
We come back.

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Date: 3/27/2020 4:12:00 PM
I see that you understand fully "the quiet within, the quiet without" - this is a rare gift. Even more rare is the ability to write it like this.
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David Holmes
Date: 3/29/2020 4:08:00 PM
Caren - thank you for this wonderful comment - very much appreciate you reading and commenting on all my poems. David
Date: 3/7/2020 9:41:00 AM
l really really like this poem.l kept re reading it as l kept being transported to a time l love, the Autumn. l was born in the Autumn, l was married in the Autumn. l hope my end is in the Autumn, then l will have truly returned. J.x
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Date: 3/7/2020 10:04:00 AM
Jackie - thank you for your kind comments and reading my poem, I love autumn as well, and I love the mountains. David
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