Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Limerick

Retirement and the Mountains

Retirement in the Mountains

There once was an old mountain man.
He hunted and lived off the land.
He always felt fine.
When he danced in moonshine.
So he danced and imbibed like he planned.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 11, 2010

Poetic form:  Limerick

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2010 at 3:50 PM Another cute Limerick from your gifted pen.. so amusing and your title is very neat and cool... thankxxx for sharing this fun write..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Constance La France March 12, 2010 at 9:15 AM I love this limerick.. and the old mountain man had the right idea.. dance to your own tune... Constance

Gerard Keogh Jr. March 12, 2010 at 8:08 AM Light and witty, like a limerick should be. You are truly an accomplished poetess and it is truly an honor to have one such as yourself comment favorably on my little scribblings. Thank you so much! You are very kind! Regards, Gerard.

Brian Strand March 11, 2010 at 11:45 PM Congrats on your recent contest success Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2010 at 12:50 PM Good one, Dane Ann. Great rhythm and fun topic. Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse March 11, 2010 at 12:49 PM enjoyed, funny

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2010 at 12:29 PM Sounds like a relaxed kinda man...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara