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Retirement and the Mountains

Retirement in the Mountains There once was an old mountain man. He hunted and lived off the land. He always felt fine. When he danced in moonshine. So he danced and imbibed like he planned. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 11, 2010 Poetic form: Limerick

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Date: 3/12/2010 3:50:00 PM
Another cute Limerick from your gifted pen.. so amusing and your title is very neat and cool... thankxxx for sharing this fun write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:15:00 AM
I love this limerick.. and the old mountain man had the right idea.. dance to your own tune... Constance
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:08:00 AM
Light and witty, like a limerick should be. You are truly an accomplished poetess and it is truly an honor to have one such as yourself comment favorably on my little scribblings. Thank you so much! You are very kind! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 3/11/2010 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your recent contest success Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:50:00 PM
Good one, Dane Ann. Great rhythm and fun topic. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:49:00 PM
enjoyed, funny
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:29:00 PM
Sounds like a relaxed kinda man...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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