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Retired Commodes -

make nice flower pots
after years of taking crap
they seem happy now

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Skat A

Date: 9/24/2015 11:48:00 AM

LOL, Tim, I've seen these commodes turned into a flower pot. I once had a neighbor who turned her bedpans into flower pots. LOL, it was a very funny thing to enjoy... Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/22/2015 7:45:00 AM

I see so many toilets turned flower pots...guess it contained a lot of fertilizer...grats on your win

Dan Cwiak

Date: 9/22/2015 3:08:00 AM

Kudos on this bleeping win!

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/22/2015 1:52:00 AM

Brilliant idea to Senryu, Tim. great stuff, well done. Regards, Viv

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/22/2015 12:23:00 AM

Congrats on ur very witty winning write Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:16:00 PM

oh tim, I remember this one from a long time ago. I think it won something in one of mY contests. It's still a favorite funny for me. At least she likes toilets better than cowpies. heehee. Congrats to you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:48:00 AM

hahaha, i enjoyed the deep hidden humor, Tim. congrats

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 5:03:00 AM

Hilarious! great win hugs jan xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:48:00 PM

Tim :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2014 11:38:00 PM

aha, here it is again. That funny senryu. WAY to go with your win, Tim!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/24/2014 9:38:00 AM

Very apt perspective. Congratulations on the win, tim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/24/2014 9:14:00 AM

Ha ha, you rock. Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2014 11:47:00 PM

hi Tim, awesome win...Linda

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/23/2014 11:03:00 PM

I don't blame them, I would be happier, too! LOL! Great humor in this very clever poem, Tim. Congrats on your win in my contest!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/29/2013 11:29:00 AM

A very funny picture... Congrtulations on your win :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/22/2013 6:51:00 PM

congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/22/2013 6:47:00 PM

ha! very funny! congrats on your win!

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/22/2013 2:50:00 PM

Loved it... Congrats on the win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/22/2013 7:31:00 AM

Ha love it Tim, well done xx

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 7:25:00 AM

Lol, Tim love the funny. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 7:38:00 PM

lol, I remember this one. Tim, glad Andrea, enjoyed this fun to read poem. Congratulations :-) always~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2013 5:58:00 PM

geez, I can't believe I never even saw or commented to this one before. I thought I'd seen all your stuff, TIm. Actually, it's the title that makes this poem. Without the title, I'd be going, what??? Congrats for your win. Loved it.