Resurrected Flames


During a solitary December blizzard in a Himalayan monastery-- a storyteller's humming enchants me. A distant moonlit snowflake blazes melodious stories, with no listeners, sprinkling rhythms in universe only for pilgrims seeking them. Faith lights up my immortal muse.

Under gleaming snow flames of my muse resurrect; survive life's blizzards ~~A memoir from my journey
May 31, 2020 Rhymes And Reasons Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier ~Winner: Honorable Mention
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Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:35 PM
A huge huge congratulations on your high placement. You deserve it.
Mishra Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation Funom! Blessings :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:31 PM
This is beautifully delightful, Aditi!
Mishra Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:43 PM
Thanks Andrea! :)
Murray Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 2:15 PM
What a journey. I remember the Himalayan mountains well. Their majestic ring above the clouds, encircling Kathmandu. A holy place indeed. Beautiful haibun Aditi.
Mishra Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 9:27 AM
I am so glad you could relate with this muse. The Himalayan mountains and a journey through them is a life changing experience. Thank you for your kind appreciation Jean. Blessings on your way :)
Poteet Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:29 PM
Delightful haibun, Aditi. Wonderful cultural poem.
Mishra Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 1:34 AM
Glad you loved it Reason. Thank you for your appreciation :)
Roper Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Back with congratulations on your win, my friend. Hugs Eve
Mishra Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 1:34 AM
Thank you for your appreciating words Eve! Blessings and love :)
Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Lovely, inspired penning, Aditi... It's the pen's flaming sword that pierces the heart of even the fiercest blizzard. Congrats on your HM in Line's contest! Light and Joy, Gershon
Mishra Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Glad you love my words Gershon. Thank you for your visit and your gracious appreciation. God bless you :)
Agustin Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Wow! Congrats! So picturesque... vividly capturing the scene with your poetic language. God bless you.
Mishra Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Glad you love my words Beata. Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation. God bless you :)
Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:13 AM
No one has ever made a blizzard seem so beautiful. This is truly gorgeously written, Aditi.
Mishra Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 3:36 AM
I am glad you loved my words Caren. Appreciate your kind words full of love. God bless you :)
George   Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Your journey sounds very intriguing. Very masterful Haibun you have created with your poetic words.~~Sincerely, Elaine
Mishra Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 11:32 AM
I am glad you loved it Elaine. Thank you for your visit and your kind words of appreciation :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Now this is very beautiful! A fave!
Mishra Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Thank you for the fave Kim! Much love :)
Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Beautiful imagery in your story section flowing like a poem. The juxtaposition of fire and ice, "snowflake blazes," throughout really makes this haibun vivid! Lovely storytelling - lovely haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Mishra Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 11:05 PM
Glad you loved my words Sam. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and wishes :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Loved the imagery in your verse Aditi, What a beautiful journey you are on. Tom
Mishra Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Glad you loved it Tom. Thank you for appreciating my words :)
Roper Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Another beautiful verse from a poet that knows how to pour her soul into her works. Good luck in the contest.
Mishra Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 12:16 PM
I am thankful for your kind and generous appreciation Eve! God bless you :)
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May 31, 2020 at 10:47 AM
A wonderful and inspiring story in so few words, Aditi...well done! I am struggling to write a haibun in 40 words or less, but you have made it look easy. A fave! Have a blessed Sunday, xx Rhonda
Mishra Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 12:15 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Rhonda! I am sure you will come up with a beautiful one in this form. God bless you :)
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