Resurrected

Sipped one Pabst Sobriety lapsed Resolve collapsed Resurrected His checkered past His fiancé aghast Once more, outcast

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/5/2020 1:23:00 PM

Hi Gershon, Good monorhyme. Alcohol addiction only leads to a horrible life. Your poem expressed that fact very well- Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/5/2020 5:54:00 PM

Only good thing about alcohol abuse is Alcoholics Anonymous! Thanks, Alexis! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/4/2020 11:18:00 PM

I am glad I do not like beer (though I have never said no to a margarita!)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/5/2020 11:48:00 AM

Haha! I've never even seen a Maragarita! ~ Teetotaler

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/3/2020 1:44:00 PM

Love the rhyme scheme GW! A fun poem !!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/3/2020 3:07:00 PM

Ha, ha! Glad you enjoyed the Pabst, Mike... This one may get a little blowback, though, from some who have alcoholic relatives... Cheers and Good Cheer! :) gw