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Resurrected

Sipped one Pabst
  Sobriety lapsed
Resolve collapsed

  Resurrected
His checkered past
  His fiancé aghast
Once more, outcast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/5/2020 1:23:00 PM
Hi Gershon, Good monorhyme. Alcohol addiction only leads to a horrible life. Your poem expressed that fact very well- Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/5/2020 5:54:00 PM
Only good thing about alcohol abuse is Alcoholics Anonymous! Thanks, Alexis! :) gw
Date: 4/4/2020 11:18:00 PM
I am glad I do not like beer (though I have never said no to a margarita!)
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Date: 4/5/2020 11:48:00 AM
Haha! I've never even seen a Maragarita! ~ Teetotaler
Date: 4/3/2020 1:44:00 PM
Love the rhyme scheme GW! A fun poem !!
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Date: 4/3/2020 3:07:00 PM
Ha, ha! Glad you enjoyed the Pabst, Mike... This one may get a little blowback, though, from some who have alcoholic relatives... Cheers and Good Cheer! :) gw

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