Resurrected

Sipped one Pabst
  Sobriety lapsed
Resolve collapsed

  Resurrected
His checkered past
  His fiancé aghast
Once more, outcast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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April 5, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Hi Gershon, Good monorhyme. Alcohol addiction only leads to a horrible life. Your poem expressed that fact very well- Alexis
Wolf Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Only good thing about alcohol abuse is Alcoholics Anonymous! Thanks, Alexis! :) gw
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April 4, 2020 at 11:18 PM
I am glad I do not like beer (though I have never said no to a margarita!)
Wolf Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Haha! I've never even seen a Maragarita! ~ Teetotaler
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April 3, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Love the rhyme scheme GW! A fun poem !!
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Ha, ha! Glad you enjoyed the Pabst, Mike... This one may get a little blowback, though, from some who have alcoholic relatives... Cheers and Good Cheer! :) gw
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