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The flollowing poem is: a Petrachan sonnet  for contest sponsored by:  Craig Cornish

A total of 14 lines, each consisting of 10 syllables.

8 lines  with a rhyming scheme of abbaabba

and,  6 lines in a rhyming scheme of cdecde

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So close to death in Winter's cold embrace
Within a frozen dream I lie below
A pristine eiderdown of  fallen snow
Where ice has formed in patterns of white lace
That hold me  now suspended in this place
Until again I hear the water flow
When dawn is broken by a Rooster's crow
As your warm breath is felt upon my face

 
When you dear Spring arrive on Angel's wings
And melt this spell that Winter has on me 
Than I, your Mother Earth, will rise again
Revitalized by all the love you bring
To bloom in all the glory I can be
A sea of blossoms drenched in heaven's rain

Author:  Elaine Cecelia George

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/28/2018 9:41:00 AM
A true and glistening gem by any competent standard measured. Closing verses awe inspiring as well!! A fav...
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:07:00 AM
Elaine, well constructed with a wonderful message. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 4/21/2018 5:55:00 AM
My pleasure Craig. Thank you for the inspiration Sincerely, Elaine
Date: 4/18/2018 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful sonnet.
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Susan...and for your kind comments. Sincerely, Elaine
Date: 4/17/2018 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Elaine, lovely imagery. Well done! Viv x
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:41:00 AM
Thank your for stopping by and for your comments, Viv. Much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 4/16/2018 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Elaine, wonderful write and imagery ! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:42:00 AM
Thank your for stopping by and for your comments, Eve. Much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 4/16/2018 4:58:00 PM
So lovely, Elaine. I enjoyed your wonderful Sonnet! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:42:00 AM
Thank your for stopping by and for your comments, Sandra. Much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 4/16/2018 4:23:00 PM
Lovely, Elaine. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:43:00 AM
Thank your for stopping by and for your comments, Line. Much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 4/4/2018 12:00:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous, eloquent delivery of drama so well-written with flow that wrapped me in the poem's tale, and the sadness of a poetically accepted death -yi, how moving. I had a good time here! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 4/13/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, CayCay...much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 3/31/2018 5:15:00 PM
This is truly beautiful, Elaine! Love the contrast between the two seasons. Best regards // paul
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Date: 4/13/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, Paul...much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 3/28/2018 6:01:00 PM
You did well and yes it's a different form to take on...I too found it awkward to write...good luck
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Date: 4/13/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, Frederic...much appreciated. Elaine
Date: 3/28/2018 5:09:00 AM
A lovely last line, Spring is trying to break through, but adverse weather is having its say... Lovely poem Elaine..
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Date: 3/28/2018 5:15:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by at this early hour, and commenting on my poem. This was a difficult form to construct, but I love a challenge. Yes! Spring is fickle this year. bfn. Elaine
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