Restless Zen

A Japanese stone garden
brass wind chimes,
little birds feeding,
fountain tinkling - the whole works.

I sit, empty my mind,
intone a low pitched Buddhist hymn
which scares the birds away.

The wind picks up,
chimes no longer tinkle -but loudly clang.
The fountain sprays itself
into my frowning face.

Frustrated,
now I can hardly hear myself
not-thinking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Wow…lol…makes a good poem though.
Ashford Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Kim, much appreciate this response. E
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