Resting

My mind is in need of rest
just for a moment, brief,
a silent little repose here
will surely bring to me relief.

My heavy eyelids gently fall
and shut out the entire world,
my hair lays down and relaxes
even though it has been curled.

I breathe in slowly and deeply
my heartbeat settles down,
my ears can hear around me
the wind's soft whispering sound.

It lifts me to a far off place
where clouds become my bed,
I reach out to grab another
like a soft pillow for my head.

You can only imagine
what I can only see,
as I dream a beautiful dream
that was meant just for me.





Inspired by the painting, "Resting" by Victor Gabriel Gilbert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mandani Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 12:07 PM
It's like floating in the air with gently whispering wind lulling you to sleep. It would have been placed much higher had it been in a different category. very nice.
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:12 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, Abdul. I really appreciate it! I'm okay with my placement in the contest. Any kind of mention on a winner's list is an honor for me.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:41 PM
you painted such a restful picture Kelly congrats on your HM:-) Hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 1:28 AM
I appreciate the nice comments and kind congrats. Thank you, Jan! Hugs :)
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Loved this, SP. The simplicity is refreshing. This piece lulled me into loving it. Great imagery and feel as well. Kudos, Kel! :)
Deschler Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 12:43 AM
Thank you for the kind comments, Chan! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. It is so nice to have you back on The Soup, my friend! :)
A  Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Sweet win Kelly,, Love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 4:54 PM
HI KELLY, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
Delaney Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Kelly: Congratulations on your fine winning poem. Love the cloud sequence. Excellent interpretation of the painting. Hugs, SuZ
Deschler Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats and the nice comments. I appreciate it very much, Suzanne!
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Dear Kelly, you surely capture the restful image in the painting with your gentle descriptions. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Deschler Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Thank you for the nice comments and the kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Carolyn!
Guzzi Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Of dream of one with no cares, if only ... Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 12:26 PM
That would be a dream come true, Debbie.... Thank you for the kind congrats!
Thomas Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 1:58 PM
I loved this poem, the imagery is fabulous :)
Deschler Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Thank you for the nice comments, Angie. I appreciate it very much. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem :)
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Bravo Kelly..... Incredible breathtaking.. images going through my head.. I love it... ohhh our beautiful dreams that are just for us... beautiful my friend Brooke
Deschler Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Brooke. It really means so much to me. I'm happy that you enjoyed this one, my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 3:56 PM
that was really a cute line about hair relaxing even though it is curled. How clever!! I sure enjoyed this one. You used resting like i did , instead of "dream" title. I hope it is good luck for us!~
Bordner Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Composing poems inspired by paintings is a beautiful endeavor Kelly. You have done so very deftly. It is wise to cherish our private worlds. J.A.B.
Deschler Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Thank you so much, Justin. Your positive comments meant a lot to me!.... Paintings can be a great inspiration. I love to immerse myself into them, because it allows me to become someone else for awhile. Almost like an actor taking on a new role. I can imagine their emotions and just write as if I were that person, and bring them to life.
Enriquez Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Dear Kelly: Well done. Good read. Great write. Leon
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Thank you very much, Leon!
Thajudeen Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:31 PM
A good theme.
Deschler Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Thank you, Muhammad!
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