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Rest Now Beneath This Stone - Jq

Slow, slow, fresh snow is falling,
numb my footsteps are crawling.
My heart is broken and dead,
now, but a frail thread long fled.

Falling my tears wet your tomb,
crawling down my face of gloom.
Dead flowers are withered blown,
fled, rest now beneath this stone.

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March 7, 2019


Poetry/Jueju/Rest Now Beneath This Stone
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1121-979-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym. 


Written for the contest, Jueji-Quijue, With a Twist
sponsor, Charles Messina

First Place

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Janice Canerdy Date: 4/17/2019 8:46:00 AM CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance! Creative style! Janice Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 4/17/2019 9:45:00 AM Janice, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment ~

Charles Messina Date: 4/17/2019 6:11:00 AM So touching, Constance. I love this poem...beautifully penned and very well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 4/17/2019 9:46:00 AM Charles, thank you for another inspiring contest theme and for my amazing placement and congratulations ~

Jack Horne Date: 3/15/2019 9:57:00 AM oh, love this - hope this will be a big winner Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 4/17/2019 9:46:00 AM Jack, thanks for visiting with love and your hope came true, a first place win!

Suzanne Delaney Date: 3/12/2019 5:25:00 PM You make tragety look beautiful. Great entry and a sure winner. SuZ Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/13/2019 12:29:00 PM Suz, thanks for visiting, somehow I find there is a beauty in death, yes, I am an odd girl !

Alexis Y. Date: 3/8/2019 8:06:00 PM WoW! BW, You have penned such a well written piece. I found it to be sad yet beautiful at the same time. You are able to express meloncoly topics very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/13/2019 12:28:00 PM Alexis, thanks for visiting my poem with that awesome comment ~

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/8/2019 6:42:00 AM Beautifully done, for sure. The photo is exquisite as is the poem, my friend. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/8/2019 6:53:00 PM Caren, thanks for the beautiful ~

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2019 7:03:00 PM soupmail, dear heart Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/13/2019 12:27:00 PM :)-

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2019 6:42:00 PM wow, I love his invented form and what you came up with. I gotta study this form out. Wonderful melancholy lines, dear. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/8/2019 6:54:00 PM Andrea, thanks for the love ~

Arturo Michael Date: 3/7/2019 5:15:00 PM Yes...old time poetry at it's best...Like it a lot... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/8/2019 6:55:00 PM Arturo, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2019 3:35:00 PM aww such melancholy in your lines Constance I've not had chance to write for contests or read the new ones, good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/8/2019 6:56:00 PM Jan, thanks for visiting, oh yes, my style of sad for sure~