Rest Now Beneath This Stone - Jq

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Slow, slow, fresh snow is falling, numb my footsteps are crawling. My heart is broken and dead, now, but a frail thread long fled. Falling my tears wet your tomb, crawling down my face of gloom. Dead flowers are withered blown, fled, rest now beneath this stone. _____________________ March 7, 2019 Poetry/Jueju/Rest Now Beneath This Stone Copyright Protected, ID 19-1121-979-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Jueji-Quijue, With a Twist sponsor, Charles Messina First Place

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/17/2019 8:46:00 AM

CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance! Creative style! Janice

Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2019 9:45:00 AM

Janice, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment ~

Charles Messina

Date: 4/17/2019 6:11:00 AM

So touching, Constance. I love this poem...beautifully penned and very well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win...Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2019 9:46:00 AM

Charles, thank you for another inspiring contest theme and for my amazing placement and congratulations ~

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2019 9:57:00 AM

oh, love this - hope this will be a big winner

Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2019 9:46:00 AM

Jack, thanks for visiting with love and your hope came true, a first place win!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/12/2019 5:25:00 PM

You make tragety look beautiful. Great entry and a sure winner. SuZ

Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2019 12:29:00 PM

Suz, thanks for visiting, somehow I find there is a beauty in death, yes, I am an odd girl !

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/8/2019 8:06:00 PM

WoW! BW, You have penned such a well written piece. I found it to be sad yet beautiful at the same time. You are able to express meloncoly topics very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2019 12:28:00 PM

Alexis, thanks for visiting my poem with that awesome comment ~