Rest Assured

I was a girl of nine or ten
had been told by my mother again and again
to stay out of the tops of trees

One day she saw me high as the skies
Swaying on limbs as the old tree sighs
And provided a vital lesson to me

I saw as she a woman of forty and change
Taking not the time her skirt to arrange
Slowly began the climb.

Firmly ensconced on the limb just below
 she broke off a switch that we both could know
I was capable of holding on.

She could not keep me away from my nest
Perhaps with this knowledge she could at least rest
And not fear for my limb or my life

Later on I encountered a snake ,my quickest decent though clothing  was rent 
my foot lightly touched the ground

I looked at the picket fence that stood at the 
base of the tree and thought but for her training
I'd have made shish ka bob of me

My training for Olympic tree climbing
drew to a close on that day
The lesson of holding on still serves me to this day

If I could  learn to pick battles some wiser seen lost  a pyrrhic victory seen as it is
won at exceedingly high cost

Look who now is afraid of heights after
tight rope walking for years it took more than a switching and snakes to bring about this fear

I'm fighting for my life here
For a life to be found worth the living
Letting go the beginning of the process of forgiving
                     
Forgive us all LORD we know not what we do
Please show us the way
help us carry it through

And help us know when to walk away
In our hour of despair we fervently pray.
Help us do your will
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Date: 9/14/2022 12:21:00 PM
Vickey your mother obviously taught you well and that comes across in your poems She sounds a lot like mine so much so I can relate Because you seem to write about family and thing that are personal to you and you treasure dearly And you have passed down and impressed upon your own daughter as well Blessed are the loved
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/14/2022 7:30:00 PM
Love the truest reflection of God's light in our lives.A quality HE possesses to the point his word doesn't say HE has love it says HE is love.Thanks for your kind comment.
Date: 9/1/2022 7:51:00 PM
Shame to say I have sat at the feet of repetition and learned the same lesson more than once.Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Date: 8/30/2022 4:47:00 PM
Forgiving...easy to say hard to do! But Love your poem
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 8/31/2022 5:18:00 PM
Thanks for your honest comment Ingrid.I want to be forgiving in nature as we are granted the mercy we ourselves extend.It's easier at times than at others.Honesty on the offenders part is almost essential as lack of taking responsibility is almost a guarantee of reuccurrance.That has been my experience anyway.Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 8/28/2022 6:46:00 PM
Whoa! Your last three stanzas blew me away. I had no idea where you were going with all this activity in the tree with the snake and everything -- and then you landed your 'craft' in just the right place, methinks. Kudos, Vickey!
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Date: 8/28/2022 2:11:00 PM
Great poem Vickey about lessons learnt….really enjoyed….Debx
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 8/29/2022 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Deb it was xtra kind of you to take the time to read and comment.Have a Marvelous Monday.
Date: 8/28/2022 4:26:00 AM
I grew up in a village and was fond of climbing trees. Snakes were many and I would encounter many of them, especially in summer. My mother didn't worry much since she had eight of us to take care of! Your poem is powerful and brings to light many of the problems parents and children face. Very well written, dearest Vickey. Blessings! I would like to thank you for your visit and comment. Who was the one who did not allow you to comment? Your PC? Your mobile? Anything else? I appreciate your resolve. Have a lovely Sunday! God bless you!
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 8/29/2022 5:12:00 AM
I don't know what the problem was Demetrius it just kept disallowing me to post saying wrong code at least three times before it allowed it to go through.You have a good and productive day as well.
Date: 8/26/2022 7:20:00 PM
The hard lessons stick with us. It’s good to spare our kids needless pain, but sometimes we have to let them fall to learn, and that’s a hard lesson for us? Enjoyed this, Vickey.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 8/26/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Jeff.
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